-Bad font. I believe someone already told you where to find Trajan Pro font
-Text hard to read
-Summary doesn't fit it. I think "you have to become the #1 assassin" is a bit ludicrous
-Screenshot summaries seem randomly placed
-"Stab people to your hearts content" isn't appropriate for a subtitle
-Screen borders are weird. As XxDunexX for better ones
-Transparent ESRB rating looks weird
-Ubisoft logo is too big, and blurry
-No legal back info
That seems to be it...keep it up, though, and make sure to put all your effort into your boxarts. Are you still using Paint?
ok, i posted this is my WIP section
credit to chibi cloud for temp, LK for screenborders(couldn't find any better for this game), and i think that's it, i dont know.
i think the front came out better than my back, but i still like the back. I purposley made the esrb on front 30 tolerance, i wanted it see through.
please tell me if anything's wrong. constructive criticism only.
edit: oh! credit to creative uncut for artwork that i got.
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anyone?
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Yikes..pretty bad, you're getting better though:
-Bad font. I believe someone already told you where to find Trajan Pro font
-Text hard to read
-Summary doesn't fit it. I think "you have to become the #1 assassin" is a bit ludicrous
-Screenshot summaries seem randomly placed
-"Stab people to your hearts content" isn't appropriate for a subtitle
-Screen borders are weird. As XxDunexX for better ones
-Transparent ESRB rating looks weird
-Ubisoft logo is too big, and blurry
-No legal back info
That seems to be it...keep it up, though, and make sure to put all your effort into your boxarts. Are you still using Paint?
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no, dude! i got rid of that over like a month ago. my last 3 boxes before this were done in photofiltre. thanks, though, i'll work on it.
edit: it's sad my boxes die so fast.
Edited at 1 decade ago
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#4, calm down its only been an hour....
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#5 any thoughts?
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