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for a first box it's impressive, but the text on the back is impossible to read.

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Really nice for a first ! The front is Ok. So is the back. Here's some tips :
-make the screenshots more visible.
-center the logo on front
-get a better font. More readable one.
-don't hide the tagline. Here, it's hiding by Hayden's head.

4.5/5 for a first !

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the front, as i said before, is pretty good. i'm glad to see you listened to my criticism.

here are some tips for the back:
- make the text a bit more visible, that can be done by using another font[ type of letters :P ] or moving the letters more apart.
- make the screenshots a tad more visible, try an subtly outer glow, or even a border [ search google. perhaps you'll find something ]
- Never hide someone's head unless it's used for artistic purposes, like a really dramatic picture.
- Stick to one colour scheme, that'll make the box flow alot more, and it'll be easier on the eyes ;)
- move the back esrb a bit up, so that it doesn't touch the proof of purchase.

good luck and good job ^^'
-Ayron


p.s.
faved for pure effort.

p.s.s.
Center the logo on the front, it's a bit to the right. if you use photoshop, use the 'ruler' tool.;)

Edited at 1 decade ago

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pretty good first!

I suggest making the caption bigger. And the character in the back looks really sliced off in a bad way. Otherwise really nice start. Lookin' forward to more boxes from you ;)

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