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Old 11-04-2009, 01:27 PM
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this is it, okay, this is one giant teaser for what i said i was going to do, i am still getting used to the new filters i downloaded, still getting used to the new font that i used as a typo title, NOTE: this is not what it will look like, i am working on a new logo for the game, the background is makeshift, it's got babylon, the prince and the dahaka which arrives from darkness.

keep this in mind while viewing, the renders are a little choppy atm, but i have been working on them and they look alot better now.

tell me what needs to go or what needs improving, THIS IS HQ AT ITS BEST.
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Old 11-04-2009, 01:31 PM
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The Ubisoft logo and the main render are a bit stretched, but that logo is sweet!
Everything's okay with the ESRB
You're improving!

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Old 11-04-2009, 01:34 PM
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yeah, i am just downloading a new ubisoft logo and prince, this one was just short of the mark, once it downloads i will replace it.

as before this is just a teaser.

the logo is lord of the rings text which i downloaded 30 mins back.
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Old 11-04-2009, 01:37 PM
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You have the Dev logo and ESRB on the wrong sides, the main render if horribly stretched (hold shift when resizing)

I would use a logo based off of the offical rather than a plain LotR font logo, and the proportions are out.

Also, its not that high-quality, just use stuff thats at least over 1000pix. Lower than that, and it will be too low quality.

Finally, you need a proper template. If your looking to make this for the PC, I recently released my PC-DVD template for use, plastic and printable versions.

Hope I helped =)
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Old 11-04-2009, 01:42 PM
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no i don't need a template, i have a high-res 360 version.

the esrb and dev logo will be switched, i just put them there for now because i didn't want to reveal what the real cover would look like.
i have just finished downloading a new prince that looks the same it's just over 1000 in height and 800 in width.
i am working on a better pop logo, this was just a typo.

yes you helped and i appreciate it alot, thank you i really appreciate it .
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You have the Dev logo and ESRB on the wrong sides
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Shit, you're right. I should probably call the company and let them know that they did it wrong...
That reminded me of when Slyder said that thing to Spypilot...
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Old 11-04-2009, 01:53 PM
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lol.

these things are all there fault.
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That reminded me of when Slyder said that thing to Spypilot...
Do you really think I care?

They look wrong on that side, my opinion.
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I'm not saying that you care, just what you said reminded me of what Slyder said.
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Honestly it looks like you placed two renders, a logo, and some dev stuff on a background. That render is stretched yet again. An your quality sucks, yet again.
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Old 11-04-2009, 02:55 PM
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Guys its a teaser, just a quick "throw together" that resembles what the finished product will look like. Its just to give us an idea.
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Old 11-04-2009, 02:58 PM
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Guys its a teaser, just a quick "throw together" that resembles what the finished product will look like. Its just to give us an idea.
Thank you for a definition. But we are critiquing his work as i right now. And like you said it resembles the final product so we don't want it to look like this teaser, which in my opinion is very bad. No offense to you Miamiflash.
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Old 11-04-2009, 05:18 PM
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No offense taken roarshark, i used no template, no "Real" work on this version, i did just throw some stuff together to give you an idea, just an idea or thought of what the finished product will look like once i have finished rendering everything.

Believe me the final product will NOT look like this.

But before i post it i will put it on the critiques forum yet again, so you can judge it before i attempt for a hall of fame box, cause that's the idea.
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