Gears of War: The Rise of Fenix

[tleeart]

Hey!

This is my first work I would like to add to VG Box Art, but I have the waiting period before I can post, so I would like a crit!

The basic premise is a Gears of War game for the DS, I know, real original.

People I've known thought it was pretty convincing when in print form, so I'll use this as for starters!

I know the plastic wrap on the front might be a little on the cheesy side, but I liked it, so ya, it prolly is gonna stay that way.

Please let me know what you think!

[tleeart]

Forgot to mention, this is before I got any templates, so I guess credit the template to Nintendo(?) Scanned it myself from Zelda: Phantom Hourglass...

Original Artwork involved:

Screens from Gears: Gamespot.com
Gears Logo: Google search
Stylus: Google search
Epic Logo, ESRB Logo: Google search for Gears of War 360 cover art scan...

[tleeart]

I know I'm just a noob around these parts, but is there any crits anybody would like to add? Any contructive criticism would be very helpful!

[goku252525]

I like it and i think its great for your first. The front may be a bit boring but i think it looks like something i would actually see in a store. Keep making boxes because i would like to see more^^

[tleeart]

I like it and i think its great for your first. The front may be a bit boring but i think it looks like something i would actually see in a store. Keep making boxes because i would like to see more^^

Cool, thank you for your comment! I can see your point about the front being a little plain. I can try and back it up by saying that I was going for simplicity...maybe I'll just make an alternate front image a little more striking than this.

Thank you very much, I have several ideas I plan on trying to pull off soon!

[shadysaiyan]

I think it looks pretty good, the title sounds like it would be for the comic book or something though. replace those skull screenshots though :P

[tleeart]

I think it looks pretty good, the title sounds like it would be for the comic book or something though. replace those skull screenshots though :P

I guess that just came off looking like I didn't have anything better to put there. they were supposed to represent the opposite screen. Perhaps I'll add some sort of HUD to those screens.

I thought the title was catchy, I don't really plan on changing that, but I will take your other advise in mind, thank you.