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Thread: Gears of War: The Rise of Fenix

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    Default Gears of War: The Rise of Fenix

    Hey!

    This is my first work I would like to add to VG Box Art, but I have the waiting period before I can post, so I would like a crit!

    The basic premise is a Gears of War game for the DS, I know, real original.

    People I've known thought it was pretty convincing when in print form, so I'll use this as for starters!

    I know the plastic wrap on the front might be a little on the cheesy side, but I liked it, so ya, it prolly is gonna stay that way.

    Please let me know what you think!
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    Default Btw

    Forgot to mention, this is before I got any templates, so I guess credit the template to Nintendo(?) Scanned it myself from Zelda: Phantom Hourglass...

    Original Artwork involved:

    Screens from Gears: Gamespot.com
    Gears Logo: Google search
    Stylus: Google search
    Epic Logo, ESRB Logo: Google search for Gears of War 360 cover art scan...

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    Default Any Crits?

    I know I'm just a noob around these parts, but is there any crits anybody would like to add? Any contructive criticism would be very helpful!

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    I like it and i think its great for your first. The front may be a bit boring but i think it looks like something i would actually see in a store. Keep making boxes because i would like to see more^^

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    Quote Originally Posted by goku252525 View Post
    I like it and i think its great for your first. The front may be a bit boring but i think it looks like something i would actually see in a store. Keep making boxes because i would like to see more^^
    Cool, thank you for your comment! I can see your point about the front being a little plain. I can try and back it up by saying that I was going for simplicity...maybe I'll just make an alternate front image a little more striking than this.

    Thank you very much, I have several ideas I plan on trying to pull off soon!

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    I think it looks pretty good, the title sounds like it would be for the comic book or something though. replace those skull screenshots though :P

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    Quote Originally Posted by shadysaiyan View Post
    I think it looks pretty good, the title sounds like it would be for the comic book or something though. replace those skull screenshots though :P
    I guess that just came off looking like I didn't have anything better to put there. they were supposed to represent the opposite screen. Perhaps I'll add some sort of HUD to those screens.

    I thought the title was catchy, I don't really plan on changing that, but I will take your other advise in mind, thank you.

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