What are you going to do with your life?

[Moogle]

Yea it is. But I already know how to write a professional script. Ive been reading movie scripts for two weeks now. I read the Full Men In Black script along with the Batman Begins script. And man I got to tell you it was a whole lot different from the movies too.


Now could someone please tell me what they thought about the part I wrote?

I hope you know it takes more than 2 weeks of reading two scripts to be an expert in writing. It takes imagination and passion to achieve anything creative, especially if you are trying to break in early and be innovative. The small part you gave us (and the the idea in general) wasnt very interesting, and it seemed too much like "Epic Movie" or "Meet the Spartans" which to be honest are terrible movies. Though thats just my opinion, I dont know how those two movies sold, so you might have a winner I guess.
Sorry if I sounded harsh your post just seemed a bit cocky.

[Shadow the Hedgehog]

I just wanna do something, anything, that people could know me, you know what I mean? Not like movie star fame, but like a one-hit-wonder, or go to the Olympics, or even a designer at a big company. I just think it would be really cool for people to know who I am

[jevangod]

Eh, just seemed immature, and exactly what Epic Movie etc, has been doing. I also hope that you aren't using the same poor grammar and spelling in your actual script

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hell no. my script is going to be nothing like Epic movie and all that crap I hate those movies. I mean look up epic movie and disastor movie on comingsoon.net and you will see nothing but bad comments for it. I left one on there too. My movie will be funny like the first and second scary movie, not the third or the fourth. And no it will not have bad grammer. Believe me I have good grammer, when im writing something that is going to possibly determine my future especially. I just wanted to show you all how it might start off.

[Ratchetcomand]

I hope my comic works out well, i think Japan needs it own superhero and not some lameone like Krama the rilder. And america needs it own anime/manga not those cheap ones on nick like Speed Racer and Captain Mikey.

[Moogle]

I hope my comic works out well, i think Japan needs it own superhero and not some lameone like Krama the rilder. And america needs it own anime/manga not those cheap ones on nick like Speed Racer and Captain Mikey.

Youre a bit behind.
There are plenty of manga series that arent "speed racer" or "captain mikey" made by various people around the world.
Tokyopop is even holding "tryouts" for a new title from an american author.
Go to there site and click "manga pilot" you upload the first chapter of your manga, and then people vote. The ones with the best comments and votes get published.
There are alot of super heroes in Japan, there are thousands and thousands of anime and manga titles, and alot of them follow the idea of a super hero.

[jevangod]

I hope you know it takes more than 2 weeks of reading two scripts to be an expert in writing. It takes imagination and passion to achieve anything creative, especially if you are trying to break in early and be innovative. The small part you gave us (and the the idea in general) wasnt very interesting, and it seemed too much like "Epic Movie" or "Meet the Spartans" which to be honest are terrible movies. Though thats just my opinion, I dont know how those two movies sold, so you might have a winner I guess.
Sorry if I sounded harsh your post just seemed a bit cocky.

Uhhh you dont need imagination to read a script. I know what im going to write about. I have imagination to write if thats what you need. But I know how to type correctly and all for a script but im just learning how to put everything in place to make it look professional

[Moogle]

Uhhh you dont need imagination to read a script. I know what im going to write about. I have imagination to write if thats what you need. But I know how to type correctly and all for a script but im just learning how to put everything in place to make it look professional

I said you needed imagination to WRITE one not READ one.
Oh I have no doubt of your typing skills, were on a forum its not like im expecting you to type 100% awesome >_> no one does that.
But yeah good luck with the script. Does it have a title?

[jevangod]

I said you needed imagination to WRITE one not READ one.
Oh I have no doubt of your typing skills, were on a forum its not like im expecting you to type 100% awesome >_> no one does that.
But yeah good luck with the script. Does it have a title?

Ok kewl, And no it doesnt im thinking of something like "The real Legends" or "We are Legends"

[Skyrunner]

People think Im good at voice-acting, like for cartoons or animated movies. I just don't want my voice to be heard on the next pokemon show.

[Skyrunner]

nah, Right after I finish Raritan Valley Community College

You go to Raritan Valley?? I live right in Branchburg, where do you live?

[jevangod]

People think Im good at voice-acting, like for cartoons or animated movies. I just don't want my voice to be heard on the next pokemon show.

Same with me. I can do Jason Sathams voice and I use to be able to do Pee Wee Hurmans voice perfectly. I can do all kinds of voices. After Im done writing my script I plan on writing some kind of cartoon movie. A Kids movie since those make alot of money. Kind of like that movie Hoodwinked. Damn that movie was so good I just watched it this morning.

[Skyrunner]

Same with me. I can do Jason Sathams voice and I use to be able to do Pee Wee Hurmans voice perfectly. I can do all kinds of voices. After Im done writing my script I plan on writing some kind of cartoon movie. A Kids movie since those make alot of money. Kind of like that movie Hoodwinked. Damn that movie was so good I just watched it this morning.

Hire me as an actor haha I saw Hoodwinked on Sunday for like the third time, that movie is stupidly hilarious.

[jevangod]

Hire me as an actor haha I saw Hoodwinked on Sunday for like the third time, that movie is stupidly hilarious.

LOL sure i mean if I get around to writing a cartoon movie ill let you know where you can audition. Im trying to make up something sort of like Hoodwinked but I dont know what.

[jevangod]

Also noted for my movie that you will be able to hear the dogs inner thoughts and stuff. Like he'll say why he stayed and he will be calling the main character dumb and crap. I will be putting things in there that some one would normally say in the movie theater. Like after he accidently falls on the knife and crawls and the other dogs are about to come. the dog will be saying things like " Get yo ass up nigga damn you about to get us killed".


Yea I know no one likes the N word. But im adding it in there because its funny in situations like that.


BTW Final Destination is on WGN America right now.

[Ratchetcomand]

Youre a bit behind.
There are plenty of manga series that arent "speed racer" or "captain mikey" made by various people around the world.
Tokyopop is even holding "tryouts" for a new title from an american author.
Go to there site and click "manga pilot" you upload the first chapter of your manga, and then people vote. The ones with the best comments and votes get published.
There are alot of super heroes in Japan, there are thousands and thousands of anime and manga titles, and alot of them follow the idea of a super hero.

But there is not a lot superheros in japan like Spawn or The Punisher. And no Goku and Luffy don't count.

I never hear about the trys out from Tokyopop, i have to check it out soon!

[IceFox]

I hope you know it takes more than 2 weeks of reading two scripts to be an expert in writing. It takes imagination and passion to achieve anything creative, especially if you are trying to break in early and be innovative. The small part you gave us (and the the idea in general) wasnt very interesting, and it seemed too much like "Epic Movie" or "Meet the Spartans" which to be honest are terrible movies. Though thats just my opinion, I dont know how those two movies sold, so you might have a winner I guess.
Sorry if I sounded harsh your post just seemed a bit cocky.

Pretty much how I felt about it.

Writing a movie takes excessive effort. Creativity is key and you need to map things out ahead of time. Making it up as you go along only tends to work for J.J. Abrams.

Can we see a snippet of your script?

Also, if you are using Word or something. I'd recommend...not using Word. Celtx is a free piece of software made for screenwriting. It has a lot of great features to keep things really organized and simple.

http://www.celtx.com/

[jevangod]

Pretty much how I felt about it.

Writing a movie takes excessive effort. Creativity is key and you need to map things out ahead of time. Making it up as you go along only tends to work for J.J. Abrams.

Can we see a snippet of your script?

Also, if you are using Word or something. I'd recommend...not using Word. Celtx is a free piece of software made for screenwriting. It has a lot of great features to keep things really organized and simple.
And thanks for the website.
http://www.celtx.com/

I havent started writing it yet. But I have been posting things that will be in it but none of yall have given me any feedback yet so I mean if I dont get feed back on that what is the point on posting my script.

[IceFox]

I havent started writing it yet. But I have been posting things that will be in it but none of yall have given me any feedback yet so I mean if I dont get feed back on that what is the point on posting my script.

You've gotten 3 pieces of feedback on it. Me, Moogle, and Karma.

[jevangod]

You've gotten 3 pieces of feedback on it. Me, Moogle, and Karma.

I didnt see you guys quote it thats why. You guys have been talking about what I should do to write it and how many weeks it should take to write. Nothing about what I wrote about my movie.

[theredlight]

i hope to become a graohic artest or make comics for the paper