I hope you know it takes more than 2 weeks of reading two scripts to be an expert in writing. It takes imagination and passion to achieve anything creative, especially if you are trying to break in early and be innovative. The small part you gave us (and the the idea in general) wasnt very interesting, and it seemed too much like "Epic Movie" or "Meet the Spartans" which to be honest are terrible movies. Though thats just my opinion, I dont know how those two movies sold, so you might have a winner I guess.
Sorry if I sounded harsh your post just seemed a bit cocky.