Fourth Box: Sonic The Hedgehog 1 DS

[SuperSonic_3]

Sonic 1 DS all MK 2.jpg
this is my fourth box to the critiques forum, my Sonic 2 Box is on the site now so be sure to look for it
title is: sonic the hedgehog 2 genesis DS
anyway to start the next heres Sonic 1 Genesis DS.

PS: Better when enlarged. it looks better and legible.

[Cerium]

The text on the back is very hard to read.
Also some screenshot borders may look nice?
On the front, maybe you could add some other stuff
in the background like rings or even chaos emeralds?
You know, just to shake things up a bit

[SuperSonic_3]

thanks feel free to check the rest of my boxes
i even posted one on the site

[SuperSonic_3]

this box will be put onto the site when i can post it

[terryn0]

I like it. Everything in it is original which is what i would look for if they remade it. It's got a few jaggies that i dont admire too much but its fine.

[Soundwave]

this box will be put onto the site when i can post it

Did you read a word Cerium wrote...

He gave some useful tips and you ignored him..

that's bad man..

You shouldnt post unnessecary threads

[TwistedTinkerToy]

A few things:

1. Stop making so many boxes.
2. Stop making so many boxes that look the same!
3. Listen to our critism.
4. Do something other than Sonic!

[R2C]

A few things:

1. Stop making so many boxes.
2. Stop making so many boxes that look the same!
3. Listen to our critism.
4. Do something other than Sonic!

He's right. Also, Listen to Cerium he did give the best advice.