Radiata Stories WiP (Numerobetically)

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Something new.

[NintendoRevolution]

its so sleek and clean. I like

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Thank you

[qwerty334]

Lookin' good. ;D
Some of my nit-picks, however, are that you should take off the outerglow on the characters. It makes them seem 'pasted on'. Also, you should make the characters blend in better by overlapping some of the leaves from the background, and move the logo down a bit. Oh, and there's a hard edge near the top that can be easily fixed by smudging.

These are all technical errors that can be fixed in minutes... but the concept is very nice. I love the red/orange/yellow color scheme.

[MARKER]

Looking good... needs better blending with the edges as qwerty mentioned...

oh... and you can use this if you want

http://i210.photobucket.com/albums/b...diata-logo.png

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You're such a lovely person MARKER, lol.

A huge help.

Thanks qwerty.

[ELCrazy]

I love it, excellent composition. I think that MARKER's logo suits it better.

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I do too. I had to render that one from a wallpaper and I was NOT happy about it haha. Update's coming, about two minutes or so.

@qwerty I couldn't get the leaves to overlap properly (well, they overlapped, but it was ugly, so I say it wasn't proper) and as my Prnt Scrn button is not working for some odd reason, I can't get the leaves I want.

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Updated.

[Ladykiller]

I'd still suggest quite a bit more blending on the bottom of the center pic so that it feels more "one" with the background.

Since the sword doesn't continue onto the bottom, some subtle blending would be the next best choice here. I suggest using the eraser tool on the edge of the bottom of the central pic at about 50% opacity.

A bit more blending on that top part with the blue wouldn't hurt either. :]

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Do you mean get rid of the blue part or just make it more subtle? Either one works for me.

[Ladykiller]

Either one works for me.

Same here.

Though I think that making it subtle will look better in the end.

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Updated.

I think I like this better.