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Thread: Haze Special Edition WIP

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    Default Haze Special Edition WIP

    Since No one ever looks at stuff made by low rank boxartists like me there is no point in posting my box I'm working on. Thanks for not reading this.

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    aww..i just wasted 6 seconds.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ayron View Post
    aww..i just wasted 6 seconds.
    I was wrong, may be someone does look at nobody boxartists.

    Any way heres the box I'm working on:

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    The back looks awesome so far. Personally I'd add a bit more to the front but the back set up is what's going to make it fave-worthy to me.

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    Default V2

    Ok, I worked more on the back. The black will be removed once I find something to put there in it's place. I tried to improve the front. I think it looks worse but thats just me. I think I will change the pegi template to an esrb so I can fit more stuff on it. Anyways here it is:

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    That back is srsly amazing. Front looks good but the "special edition" part looks tacky.

    *seal of approval*

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    Ooohhh lah lah. Look wonderful, man.

    Make sure you make room for some screenshots though. :]

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ladykiller View Post
    Ooohhh lah lah. Look wonderful, man.

    Make sure you make room for some screenshots though. :]
    I know, I think I'm going to remove the mantel box and put the description in it's place.

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    Looking good.... although what's with the BIG "B" in the text?? Are you using some featured font that has only a Capital "B"? Looks odd.

    I like the Mantal plate. Maybe you can move it onto the top corner, like it's bolted on that brown hex box? You can then have a horizontal strip of screenshots where the Mantel plate is across the width of the back.... which means, you'll have to split the descriptive text (paragraph above screenshot and paragraph below). Just a suggestion

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    Quote Originally Posted by MARKER View Post
    Looking good.... although what's with the BIG "B" in the text?? Are you using some featured font that has only a Capital "B"? Looks odd.

    I like the Mantal plate. Maybe you can move it onto the top corner, like it's bolted on that brown hex box? You can then have a horizontal strip of screenshots where the Mantel plate is across the width of the back.... which means, you'll have to split the descriptive text (paragraph above screenshot and paragraph below). Just a suggestion
    Thanks for the suggestion, I'm using a font that only has a capital B, I'll just change the font size of the B so it's smaller.

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    Ok, thanks to everybody who helped me with this box. I still need a fight the good fight tagline for the back.


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    The back looks amazing, I'll fav

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    Looks cool sofar, please use another font for the "Special Edition", that part of the logo it doesn't do it for me so please do something to that part.....and invert the PEGI 16+ logo on the front. Some parts look a bit blurry, please fix these, then it will have the "wow"-factor.

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    Good Tagline. that would be ''Fight the Good Fight''

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    Parts look blurry, and the Special Edition part should be removed. But this is really HoF worthy

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