Prohibited Art WIP Thread (LK)

[Ladykiller]

So yeah...I think this is the first time I'm posting a WIP up.

Anyway, a few of you might now that I've recently started on a 2-box project titled "Prohibited Art." The first game would be Shadow of the Colossus...I guess that totally gives out the second game to some of you, but if you do know...then SHUSH! lol XD

I decided to post a wip thread just so it's easier to look for suggestions/comments concerning both games I'm designing for. As you might have guessed, this is my biggest and in my opinion, most beautiful project I've decided to do.

Here's part one, which is in its VERY early stages (about 20% done) I'm currently 70% finished and I might post later today. So fire away with the cc's peeps.

[E_G]

Here's part one, which is in its VERY early stages (about 20% done) I'm currently 70% finished and I might post later today. So fire away with the cc's peeps.

This box looks pretty good but it's really samey when you compare it to the other SOTC designs and I guess I expect you to bring something a lot more new to the table. It's an early stage though and excuse me but it seems daft to post a much earlier version in the critique forum. Our criticisms could be really pointless if you've already improved upon that stuff.

[White_Dove]

Looks great and lovely and jucy! Only thing is the logo don't know but it doesn't look so good on the background, maybe if you lower it a little it'll look better.

[Ladykiller]

Haha, to me it's always good to receive crits especially when designing.

Cause, I usually tend to miss things people would've pointed out. And thanks White Dove, I'll keep that in mind.

[E_G]

Haha, to me it's always good to receive crits especially when designing.

Cause, I usually tend to miss things people would've pointed out. And thanks White Dove, I'll keep that in mind.

I might be able to be more helpful with criticisms if you posted a later version. Maybe you're trying to surprise me more with the final thing. I like the logo placement actually, it stands out there but you might want to move it if others disapprove of it.

[Ladykiller]

Maybe you're trying to surprise me more with the final thing.

Well ok, you got me there E_G.

That's part of it. I myself hate it when my friends spoil things for me. Anything else, guys?