too human

[treesquirrel12]

i made this box cause i have nothing to do except wait for my bro to get off the 360 so i can screw around with my new camera. i hope you like it so far.

[E_G]

The black frame on the mature logo is uneven as a tiny thing, everything is perfect cept that, nice improvement, remember to get the text to stand out though when you do it, use a colour brush underneath the text with a 45% opacity, summary text has been your weakness so far.

[treesquirrel12]

ill try to fix that but im not sure cause i use the doublesided temp that lodo posted in the simple needs thread. but thx, if theres one thing i've learned in life its practice makes perfect i learned that with yo-yos and boxart making.

[treesquirrel12]

update
i think it looks great and will be my final version.

[E_G]

You need screenshots, the text is too big, Silicon Knights games always have posh and smallish text.

[Radioactive Bob]

and you need to give the text some drop-shadows, it's hard to read a places.

[Ratchetcomand]

Petty good , i think the text can be better and i doubt the game is going to be M .

[treesquirrel12]

ill fix these tomorrow ok but thx for the comments anyway.

[treesquirrel12]

version deux

[Ratchetcomand]

A lot better . Doubt the game will be M though.

[treesquirrel12]

well its either M or RP. anyway im gonna post now.