My First Boxart - tell me what you think.

[YoshiStar]

I've yet to submit it, but tell me what you think of it. I worked on it for about an hour ... I made it up and I call this game "The Legend of Zelda : Shadow Crest"

It took a while finding a good pic of Link that hasn't been used very often. As you can probably see, I took it from the brawl boxart.

Take a look :

[alldreamsfalldown]

Very nice for your first. Good job. ESRB logos are mismatched though.

[thecodemaster]

Wow, if this really is your first, it's excellent!

ADFD's right about the ESRB logos - the front says "T for Teen" and the back is "Everyone".
The front ESRB also has a reddish colour to it, and there are no developer logos on the front or back.

[TwistedTinkerToy]

Yeah, like TCM said. This is very excellent, and probably worth a favorite. :P

[MARKER]

First box? Cool !

Apart from what's been mentioned (Rating, logo..) --- one thing I would definitely change is description... try not to repeat words... change one of the "Nearer" to something else like "closer". Also, maybe reduce the text leading (space between lines) and add some 'features' underneath in smaller 'standard' text, since it doesn't mention anything of the actual game (ie. Link).

maybe change the "Shadow Crest" on the spine to black too.. sub-titles should usually look different and shadows are dark

Apart from that.. good start!

[YoshiStar]

Thanks for the help! Wow, now I do notice that there are quite a few mistakes in here.

I'll try and work with it right now and change everything to make it better. What do you guys think of the logo? For some reason, I was proud of it ...