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  1. #21

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    Good job, the only thing I don't like is the all caps text and that bearded guy looks out of place. Nice layout for the back.

  2. #22

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    Quote Originally Posted by Moebius View Post
    Good job, the only thing I don't like is the all caps text and that bearded guy looks out of place. Nice layout for the back.
    I know what you mean about the font. I'm looking for something that goes with the "revenant kingdom" part of the title logo ideally. Also see what you mean bout the pirate but if he's not there the girl has no body (I have limited assets unfortunately).

  3. #23

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    New project. Keeping the front a surprise for the moment. [ABZU WIP 1]
    Looking for feedback.
    I put a review on the back rather than a description but I could change it for a description.
    Here is how it could read "Immerse yourself in a vibrant ocean world full of mystery and bursting with colour and life. Descend into the heart of the ocean where ancient secrets lie forgotten. But beware, dangers lurk in the depths."
    Thoughts?
    http://imgur.com/jV9XrnS

  4. #24

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    Abzu [WIP 2].
    Some changes made to the back.
    Now description instead of review.
    Thoughts?
    http://imgur.com/8AuYTTY

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