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  1. #21

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    Good job, the only thing I don't like is the all caps text and that bearded guy looks out of place. Nice layout for the back.

  2. #22

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    Quote Originally Posted by Moebius View Post
    Good job, the only thing I don't like is the all caps text and that bearded guy looks out of place. Nice layout for the back.
    I know what you mean about the font. I'm looking for something that goes with the "revenant kingdom" part of the title logo ideally. Also see what you mean bout the pirate but if he's not there the girl has no body (I have limited assets unfortunately).

  3. #23

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    New project. Keeping the front a surprise for the moment. [ABZU WIP 1]
    Looking for feedback.
    I put a review on the back rather than a description but I could change it for a description.
    Here is how it could read "Immerse yourself in a vibrant ocean world full of mystery and bursting with colour and life. Descend into the heart of the ocean where ancient secrets lie forgotten. But beware, dangers lurk in the depths."
    Thoughts?
    http://imgur.com/jV9XrnS

  4. #24

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    Abzu [WIP 2].
    Some changes made to the back.
    Now description instead of review.
    Thoughts?
    http://imgur.com/8AuYTTY

  5. #25

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    Potential new resource for everyone.
    Looking for feedback on the redone blu-ray case and on the front of my current project.
    All feedback appreciated.
    http://imgur.com/CuJg6BK

  6. #26

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    Really stuck on this one.
    Keep on changing the images on the back because nothing seems to work together.
    I also used to have the description alone in the right box on a parchment background, but then I lose an image, so I've tried to embed it within a film shot.
    Thoughts?

  7. #27

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    Progress.
    Any feedback much appreciated.

  8. #28

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    I find the white background on the back and spine to be boring, the background on the front is a lot nicer but you should definitely finish it and upload it.

  9. #29

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    Like this?

  10. #30

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    Very nice , I think you could change the logo on the spine now. Maybe make it look more like the "growing up..." text so it stands out more.

    and maybe have a bit more yellow on the back.

  11. #31

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    Quote Originally Posted by Moebius View Post
    Very nice , I think you could change the logo on the spine now. Maybe make it look more like the "growing up..." text so it stands out more.

    and maybe have a bit more yellow on the back.
    I will be making those changes. Thank you

  12. #32

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    New PS4 game project - sword art online (invented game release). Feedback much appreciated.


  13. #33

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    Redid both titles. A lot smoother now and changed look of subtitle to match top title. Any thoughts whatsoever?

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