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    Post Venom's WIP

    Hey guys, my prototypes will be posted here and imgur! Mostly imgur probably!!
    Last edited by Venom; 03-03-2016 at 06:05 PM.

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    http://imgur.com/3pOY2Qk

    I've been working on a FIFA 16 cover, lemme know what i need improvement.

    I've also been working on a World at War 2, link up soon!

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    Looks good so far. However I would recommend making the FIFA 16 logo bigger as well as the players on the front. They look crammed in my opinion and they should have more focus be on them. The back looks perfect but the front could use a little work before I'd consider it complete

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    Thanks for the feedback bro! The next update might take till Thursday but will take my time.

    Happy easter! whenever you're readin this xD

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    While I was looking through my resources file for FIFA 16, I found the WaW 2 I made, lemme know what I need improvements

    https://imgur.com/l0V3UZT

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    My free time allowed me to do this quicker (FIFA 16): http://imgur.com/NGvd9qR

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    Still not able to post attachments ffs.

    Well, here's the demo anyways, please do leave feedback for improvements: http://imgur.com/iD8jWWO

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    I dig the layout of the back a lot, though I would suggest changing the summary font for one that isn't in all caps, something like Futura or Gotham could work well. I think there's an over abundance of the red inner glow on the characters, it doesn't really look that good in my opinion, though the ones on the edges would be fine if you tone them down a bit. The main logo's a bit blurry as well, might want to polish that up a bit. I like the idea, though, I think this has a lot of potential. Looking forward to next updates, so, keep it up, fella!

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    Yeah thanks for the feedback man I really appreciate! Helps me to become a better designer.

    I manage to fix the fonts of the back text and the front logo hopefully isn't too blurry. As for the red stuff, I'm still working on it and hopefully bring up an update soon!

    Again thanks for the tips bro!

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    FINAL PRODUCT (World at War 2): http://vgboxart.com/view/74822/call-...t-war-2-cover/

    ^ BOX DELETED, MORE WORK WILL BE PUT IN
    Last edited by Venom; 04-14-2016 at 06:24 AM.

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    Started to work on Everest: http://imgur.com/e43Q6ks

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    Ahh hahah yeah I finished it and a bit late for linking but for those who haven't seen Everest: http://vgboxart.com/view/74826/everest-cover/

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    Ditched World at War 2, moved to Black Ops 3: http://imgur.com/GIWx619

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    Not bad need some Polish

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    Quote Originally Posted by Venom View Post
    Ditched World at War 2, moved to Black Ops 3: http://imgur.com/GIWx619
    Looking good so far. My only suggestions would be to move the tagline down a smidge so that the letters arent cut off at the top and tone down the red glow around the character and the front border. Also make the spine black instead of gray

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    Your description text looks smaller than your legal text. For boxes (even though I'm not one to talk) you should try and cut down on text and only have what you need, keeping it large so it grabs attention, not have paragraphs which bore people. Your design is solid though and I have a feeling you'll be a very good designer with a bit of work.

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    First off, thanks for the feedback guys!

    Sorry for reading late, I seem to have uploaded before checking this. I'll update the box asap.
    Last edited by Venom; 04-16-2016 at 04:02 AM.

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