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    Default Takahashi's Work in Progress Thread

    I thought that making one thread for all my works in progress was much simpler.
    I currently have this in the works:

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    Very sexy, I'm liking the direction/ style you're using for this, maybe take the front overlay texture image just a tad down, but really cool looking forward to any updates

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    The japanese official cover for perfect dark has a "crimson noir" feel on it, and your cover suits it very well. I dislike the back being only japanese characters on it , maybe you could try to put Joanna Dark "inside" the characters, or something similar. And increase the contrast of the front so it combines with the contrast of the "N" logo on the upper right corner.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Higashi89 View Post
    The japanese official cover for perfect dark has a "crimson noir" feel on it, and your cover suits it very well. I dislike the back being only japanese characters on it , maybe you could try to put Joanna Dark "inside" the characters, or something similar. And increase the contrast of the front so it combines with the contrast of the "N" logo on the upper right corner.
    When you say put Joanna Dark inside the characters, do you mean the words "Joanna Dark" or a picture of Joanna Dark?
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    upped the contrast, and toned down texture.
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    I think the contrast is a little too high to the point where it is hard to make out the shapes on the front. Maybe meet in the middle between the first version and this one.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Huegh View Post
    I think the contrast is a little too high to the point where it is hard to make out the shapes on the front. Maybe meet in the middle between the first version and this one.

    How is this?
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    Looks a lot better to me.

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    Changed up the text.
    Is this any better, or was it fine?
    Don't really know what more I could do with this.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Takahashi2212 View Post
    When you say put Joanna Dark inside the characters, do you mean the words "Joanna Dark" or a picture of Joanna Dark?
    I mean a picture of Joanna.

    For you to do this, you must increase the characters' boldness or preenchiment.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Takahashi2212 View Post

    Changed up the text.
    Is this any better, or was it fine?
    Don't really know what more I could do with this.
    Little hard to see in places, I mean visually the brightness/ saturation and the text clash in places with how deep the red is. I like the new effect on the text you're trying so don't throw it out all together just play around with the contrast/ brightness on the box and text some more. You could add some silhouettes to the back as well, that might look cool.

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    Put Joanna in the characters, also thickened the characters.
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    hmmm it didn't work the way I though.

    The idea os to make her face visible inside the japanese characters. Her face is not visible.

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    So, what do you guys think of the blue?
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    Either color seems nice, but they depict different moods. It's more somber in blue.

    Also, I see you increased the contrast of the character, but doing so, thanks to the way she's draping the couch, it's hard to make out a human shape to someone who is not familiar with it being one to begin with. Can you try to achieve something between the original contrast and the current one maybe?

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    I think you should raise the saturation on the right side (or lower it on the left)

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    Quote Originally Posted by lucidhalos View Post
    Can you try to achieve something between the original contrast and the current one maybe?

    Tried my best to get an in-between.
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    Great! Keep going. It looks real good.

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    This is looking really cool, loving the blue.

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    Going for a reversible cover idea, Kind of like what Dissidia did.
    Last edited by Takahashi2212; 06-30-2014 at 12:09 PM.
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