Recreation Tournament- Metroid Prime 1+2 plus Hunters (darthnater)

[darthnater]

Since I have no idea if we can post for the Recreation Tournament, I want to know what all can be fixed about this.

[Sarashi]

Apostrophe of contraction is more important than of possession. IE: its not it's. Also I cannot see why you've picked a plus symbol instead of plus text and vice-versa. I'd just use the + symbol (IE 1 + 2 + Hunters)
Other than that change the font you've used for the text and make the colours orange and white. Currently, it does not blend well with the rest of the box.
It might just be a personal preference nitpick, but make the logo slightly smaller and lower so it isn't so close to the edge of the box.
Other than that separate the main text of the description and what can be described as 'features' putting the main text first and clearly having features listed below.
Hope I'm being constructive, as I'm not used to doing WiP critiques.

[darthnater]

Apostrophe of contraction is more important than of possession. IE: its not it's. Also I cannot see why you've picked a plus symbol instead of plus text and vice-versa. I'd just use the + symbol (IE 1 + 2 + Hunters)
Other than that change the font you've used for the text and make the colours orange and white. Currently, it does not blend well with the rest of the box.
It might just be a personal preference nitpick, but make the logo slightly smaller and lower so it isn't so close to the edge of the box.
Other than that separate the main text of the description and what can be described as 'features' putting the main text first and clearly having features listed below.
Hope I'm being constructive, as I'm not used to doing WiP critiques.

Nitpicking, but important nonetheless. I'll change the box.