Slender Box Art

[Raentyr]

So it's been a few weeks since I've even attempted anything, and even now, it's rough to get a start again.

Maybe I could get some people's input on where to go with this and furthermore that to do.
You may or may not have heard of the free indie game of Slender, but that's what I decided to work on for a PC boxart.
I have a basic cover done. Going for a bit of a minimalist style. And he is indeed on the cover, you just have to look for him.

Any help would be great so that this doesn't end up being another one of my canned projects like my CoD4 cover was.
http://sta.sh/01gxbtldvub3

[Ronthis the Werewolf]

It's really not that appealing, you should make the forest a little more visible, and maybe have one of those "When you see it" things, like have the Slenderman barely visible.

[Raentyr]

He is barely visible, that is for sure. But I'll take your advice into account.

Cheers.

[Ronthis the Werewolf]

Is he that tiny white dot in the middle?

[Raentyr]

He is indeed there. I can post the original image if you'd like.

[Higashi89]

I'll not lie, it really gives me the chills o_o'

Goddawm creepypasta box art!

[GrahamZ]

With the lack of resources for this game and it still being an indie game. I think it's good mate. KIU

[ZombieDeadpool8]

He is indeed there. I can post the original image if you'd like.

Please do, I can't see him
EDIT- Just spotted him, very clever!

[Higashi89]

With the lack of resources for this game and it still being an indie game. I think it's good mate. KIU

Will it be on Xbox Indie Games?

[White Hollow]

I think its clever, simple and nice and I would buy it if it had that box art

[Raentyr]

Hey all, thanks for the great feedback. It means a lot.

I have a few ideas for the back, I might draw them up when I get a chance (possibly this weekend) and let you guys see.
I'm also thinking about changing the front a bit, maybe making him just a tad easier to see (a bit more focus and zoom in on his part).

I'll post another update when it happens.

Cheers.