Rock Band Woodstock WIP

[Plornt]

I originally posted this as a complete boxart, but after giving it a little time to sink in, I want it to be better. Any help on how to improve it are most welcome.

Personally I like the front. I hate making backs, any tips and help on this would be much, much appreciated!

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LAST UPDATE 29/7-12

Current version:



First version:

[Martiniii332]

From the changes you made since you posted it, I can now say the front is good.

Now I still think you could add some outer glow to the green words on the back.

[Plornt]

Cheers Martinii, and thanks again for your criticism when I posted the boxart yesterday. Do you think it's OK with all that text on the back, or would you add some screens to it? I try to make it all look like a 60s poster'ish thing, will try out the outer glow on the green text but not sure if it will fit in. I'll get something changed, that's for sure! Thanks again!

[Martiniii332]

If you feel you are capable of adding screens, by all means do so. I don't know how you'll pull that off though haha. But I think adding the previous things will make this a great box. Oh, and I am glad I could help!

[twoxT]

Looks great! Maybe replace the peace sign on the back with a render though.

[Martiniii332]

Oh, and I do not know if this intentional or not, but you can see orange on the top and bottom of the template. It's pretty distracting, might want to take care of that.

[Plornt]

Cheers, Twox. I've got some ideas for the back, including a replacement of the peace sign with a render or something. I might try to tweak some screenshots and spend some time on that. Will check it out. Also I am planning to redesign the entire back, maybe put the songs on the bottom? Or rearrange them somehow. Will look online for some inspiration, me think.

@Martiniii; That is on intention, I want it to feel like a poster from the 60s. EDIT: Oh, I see you're talking about how it crosses even the template box. I'll fix that, cheers for pointing that out!

[Plornt]

Another update, still not sure about the back. Colors in the 60s are so darn hard!! (Right click - See Image to see a bigger picture)

[Martiniii332]

I love that "The Smoking Post" comment hahaha. I would suggest taking out the three periods after "Including many more," it looks a bit unprofessional. I love the update, nice job!

[Plornt]

Hehe, cheers. More like this, you mean? If so, unless anyone has any more suggestions on improving the box, I think I'll start working on the presentation and post it.

[Plornt]

The box has been posted. Cheers for the suggestions and help, Martiniii332 and twoxT!

http://vgboxart.com/view/47806/rock-band-woodstock/