Assassin's Creed III - WIP [mark_inou]

[mark_inou]

Thought ?
btw, the whole "3D compatible" things will be removed.

[Bastart]

Awesome! Looks very official

it would look nice if Connor overlapped the ACIII logo a bit, with his hood and arrows on the front.

[Bastart]

Have you made any progress on the box? I'm curious

[twoxT]

Woah! This looks incredible!

[mark_inou]

Have you made any progress on the box? I'm curious

Thanks, but with the summertime I'm too busy hanging out for the moment

[Bastart]

Thanks, but with the summertime I'm too busy hanging out for the moment

I understand, some sunlight is very pleasant to the skin

[mark_inou]

Well, I tried to get moving again, but I'm not sure for the screenshot. What do you think ?

[J0rd4n]

not very match to the game

[Bastart]

I think it looks really nice in triangle shape, but maybe you could make it a bit smaller though?
(than you could try to add another screenshot and you'd have some more space for a description ect.)

not very match to the game

What do you mean? Have you even looked at the cover? I think the box is matching fine with the game...

[Abrao]

Try to add more screenshots first and see the results.

BTW, I don't like your screenshot description. I would prefer something like: "Maîtrisez plusieurs adversaires simultanément lors de combats intenses."

Just my 2 cents

[twoxT]

I like the idea for the back but the Assassin's symbol doesn't fit.

[mark_inou]

The black rectangle is for the synopsis.

[Abrao]

Remove the border for the screenshots, and try to accentuate the shattering glass effets on them. See if you can randomize the shape of the shards a little more. Same thing for the description of the screenshots, and try something more transparent, not black.

Watch out the "è" in "meurtrière" for the description, it is not well aligned with the remaining text.

For the second description, I found something else: "Explorez la nature sauvage de la cime des arbres et fondez sur vos proies sans crier gare."

[mark_inou]

Well, it's not made to be shattering glass but to reflect the new animus tech things that you can see on the trailers and wallpapers. I'll try something transparent thought.

How do you find such great description, I spend ten minutes to find this sh*t.

[Abrao]

As you can see in my "Location" field, mon ami, french is my native language

I was always pretty good in french and in writings. The assassins in "Assassin's Creed" series were always associated with birds of prey, plus the hood they are wearing gives them the shape of a hawk, it was not complicated: I mixed all with "proie", "fondre", "arbre" and "nature sauvage".

[mark_inou]

Changed some stuff on the back and motivated myself to write a synopsis:

What do you guys think ?

[Bastart]

Can I ask, why one of the shards screenshot borders is black? I think you should make them all black or transparant as the others.
The tagline would look better if it were in another color than white (maybe red?) so it would seperate it a bit more from the actual synopsis. The text is overall a bit on the small size, maybe you could make it a tad bigger?

[djrunza]

0o0 Wow...just WOW! This actually looks very official I must say, really! I really love it! However, there's one question that I need to ask you. Let's take a look at the front cover part. The image of Conner and the "Assasin's Creed" text logo is slightly clash as in the alphabet "E" at the middle of the text logo is half hidden due to Conner's head been blocked and it turns out to be sounded like "Assasin's Crfed" instead of "Assasin's Creed" as you can see, yes? Try to play around with the character image and the text in order for us to see the full visible image of "Assasin's Creed" instead of "Assasin's Crfred". Keep up the good work my friend! Cheers!

P/S: So sorry about my bad English. :P

[BacKin5Minutes]

0o0 Wow...just WOW! This actually looks very official I must say, really! I really love it! However, there's one question that I need to ask you. Let's take a look at the front cover part. The image of Conner and the "Assasin's Creed" text logo is slightly clash as in the alphabet "E" at the middle of the text logo is half hidden due to Conner's head been blocked and it turns out to be sounded like "Assasin's Crfed" instead of "Assasin's Creed" as you can see, yes? Try to play around with the character image and the text in order for us to see the full visible image of "Assasin's Creed" instead of "Assasin's Crfred". Keep up the good work my friend! Cheers!

P/S: So sorry about my bad English. :P

Anyone who see this instantly knows its "Assassins Creed", therefore regardless of the "E" being slightly covered, it is insignificant. It also helps the design factor, indicating the artist has attempted to use layers and have focus on the protagonist. In my opinion the covered "E" isn't important, however it's all upto the box artist and no matter what he decides to do this box looks great.

[mark_inou]

Can I ask, why one of the shards screenshot borders is black? I think you should make them all black or transparant as the others.
The tagline would look better if it were in another color than white (maybe red?) so it would seperate it a bit more from the actual synopsis. The text is overall a bit on the small size, maybe you could make it a tad bigger?

'cause I was not sure wish color is the best but if it's disturbing I'll come back to the whole black.

Thanks for the feedbacks guys !