That Mr Awesome's WIP

[That Mr Awesome]

Hey guys,

I'm new here and it's possible that my English is not perfect, because I'm Dutch. So, sorry for that.
Here's my very first boxart. Feel free to comment and criticize, but I hope you like it. By the way, the text on the box is also Dutch



(View fullsize here: http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/6...oireboxart.jpg)

[J0rd4n]

for the first box, is good though. but need lots of updates

[That Mr Awesome]

[That Mr Awesome]

@J0rd4n tnx, can you name some things that need more polish?

[twoxT]

Looks good. The front really gives off a mysterious vibe which is great but it's too bad the back doesn't give off the same feel.

[GameScanner.org]

Box looks good, but edges of front cover and spine do not line up on top. U need to fix it.

[That Mr Awesome]

Allright, first of all, thank you all for the feedback. It's helpfull and I try to do something with it.

However I personally liked my first version of the back, I made two more versions. And like twoxT said, I tried to give it the same mysterious feel as the front. Please let me know wich one you guys prefer. Thanks a lot.

Version 1


Version 2:


Version 3:

[That Mr Awesome]

Just keeping you up to date. This is the box so far with one of the possible backs. What do you think?
Not the best quality of the image, but for a work in progress it's ok...

[That Mr Awesome]

First concept of my new project! Very excited about it. Tales of Monkey Island!
Best in full size

Im curious to hear what you think.

[twoxT]

Looks good so far but the shadows look strange.

[That Mr Awesome]

Looks good so far but the shadows look strange.

Thanks and agreed. I'm working on it.