Sup guys, New guy here! Just finished draft of The Amazing Spider-man cover, let me know what you think. Thanks.
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Sup guys, New guy here! Just finished draft of The Amazing Spider-man cover, let me know what you think. Thanks.
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Ooh, nice! I love the comic vibe. I'm not a fan of the logo though, I think it would look better with the official (obviously with an inverted colour.) For a first, this is impressive. Welcome to the site, you'll do well.
On an unrelated note: I really dislike the Lizard design so much, it just looks so...low budget.
i would say front is great
back need to update:
[played by Andrew Garfield] should be [Andrew Garfield]
you need to blend the picture of the scene or give it up something
and the description, change the font
sorry for my English, i am Indonesian
Thanks for welcome & for the tips. First ever attempt so any pointers are great. I agree with you on the Lizard, it looks more like a plastic toy you would buy rather than something in a move with that type of budget.
Re-Done:
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Sorry, but I don't think the green on the back looks good :/ I'd suggest to change it in the same color scheme as the front. I like the font you've chosen for the synopsis, but the spacing and visibility (it could use a small drop shadow) of the text isn't really helping. The comic style at the bottom of the back is a nice touch, but I would outline the boxes so it feels more like a comic. The stars rating is a bit to big imo. I'd suggest to make it a bit smaller. It's also missing some company logo's and some credits and legal info, but that isn't really a big issue though.
It's pretty good for a first and the front looks great![]()
I think it's fine if you're drawing inspiration from it, but on several aspects, you're just copying the one that got into the Hall of Fame. Try doing your own thing.
New One:
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Pretty good! May I ask what program you are using?
Personally this is too similar too mine:
- review is same (empire)
- screen shots are the same (apart lizard)
- captions are the same
- strip beside tagline
- placement of Lizard render
Last edited by BacKin5Minutes; 07-05-2012 at 03:30 PM.
Yea I think we can all agree that the back is a bit unoriginal, but I must admit, I really do enjoy the cover. I think what you've done on your most recent update is great.
But I'd follow what these guys are saying and try to change the back design a bit. I'm sure there are many other positive reviews of this movie, as well as different positioning that one could do for the text, lizard, and even comic book frames.