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Thread: Heavy Rain 2

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    Default Heavy Rain 2

    Hey guys, just looking for a thumbs up or two.and any ideas would be appreciated, im trying to keep it similar to the first one, but obviously a tad different. enjoy

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    The front is really good.

    The back is a bit too empty for me to comment on it right now.

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    Update


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    Looks really good so far, you have gotten quite a bit better. The only thing I don't like about the back at the moment is the red text.
    Quote Originally Posted by Mub View Post
    jesus its like a book telling me i can't read the other half because i bought it in a yard sale

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    Quote Originally Posted by Spiderpig24 View Post
    Looks really good so far, you have gotten quite a bit better. The only thing I don't like about the back at the moment is the red text.
    maby if i just have dead in red? or have it with no gradient?, and thanks btw

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    Update. im pretty happy with it , think its one of my best in a long time.

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    Very good, just watch out on the synopsis, you seem to have missed out capital letters at the starts of sentences, and lunatic is spelled as 'loonatic'. Sorry to be a pain about grammar, but it does take away from a very good box.

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