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Thread: TwistRox - The Dark Knight Rises

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    Default TwistRox - The Dark Knight Rises

    This one has been in the make for a while now. The front is more than just a wallpaper and render. If anyone has any suggestion for the Special Features, let me know please. Thanks for looking and your feedback is much appreciated.

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    This is looking promising. The only gripe I have with regards to the front is that the background is a little too bright, I think if you darkened it, then it would work better along with the render.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ZombieDeadpool8 View Post
    This is looking promising. The only gripe I have with regards to the front is that the background is a little too bright, I think if you darkened it, then it would work better along with the render.
    Agreed.

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    Whilst I will admit it looks nice I think you overuse that tagline style in your boxes.

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    Make the tagline more visible

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    Definitely make the background on the front darker. Maybe turn the opacity up on the inside if the tagline up slightly, maybe the same for the back too; I don't feel the style fits Batman.

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    Quote Originally Posted by super-mega-hyper-sonic View Post
    Whilst I will admit it looks nice I think you overuse that tagline style in your boxes.
    What the overlay/soft light layer style effect? If so, I do use it a lot, but I like it.

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    I made the front darker, increased the tagline visibility and made the front tagline plain. Should I get rid of the stroke on the screenshots?

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    No, I like the screenshots like that, although the picture, screenshot black doesn't look right in my opinion, I'm not sure what you could do about it.

    The tag line looks better but I'm not sure about the white on white, it works on the road because of the blue/white style you have going but on the road marker it looks weird.

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    Looks better, just make the bat logo more visible and possibly add a proper 3D template, then this'll be a winner.

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    Under the screens, where it is entirely black, I think you should make it something dark that fades off into black. As is it looks a bit odd.
    Quote Originally Posted by Mub View Post
    I've come to the conclusion that patrick has no eyes

    only sunglasses

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    The front doesn't really scream "badass". The movies are over the top and the front doesn't really illustrate that.

    Also, I think the back tag line could use a better font. Perhaps something more wild. I would also have the taglne go behind Bane.

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    After a short break, I've come back to this. I've changed the logo, moved Bane and made the tagline and synopsis opaque.

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    The batman logo is much more visible right now, but the black one you had on there before, looked better imo.
    The 'S' of Rise in the tagline, is overlapping the the head of the man standing on the roof of a truck, it looks kinda odd to me :/

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    I've moved the tagline, shrunk Batman and shifted the logo, while also changing back to the logo's original colours.

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    Re-worked the back by changing the background and shifting the text to the middle.
    Your feedback is much appreciated, thanks.

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    I actually prefer the previous back, over the new one.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bastart View Post
    I actually prefer the previous back, over the new one.
    Really? I wanted to represent the conflict with Batman and Bane, but if more people say that I will revert back to the previous back.

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    agreed

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bastart View Post
    I actually prefer the previous back, over the new one.
    I do prefer the previous one too.

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