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Thread: PlayStation All Stars Battle Royal WIP

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    Default PlayStation All Stars Battle Royal WIP

    Slipcover:

    Front of the box:

    Credits to Titan38 for the Playstation Sprinkle on the front (can be found here)
    Any suggestions are welcome.

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    This is awesome. My only gripe is the size of the logo. I just feel like it's too small.

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    Quote Originally Posted by MattStar View Post
    This is awesome. My only gripe is the size of the logo. I just feel like it's too small.
    Thanks, and is the logo small on the slipcase or the box?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Deathmania View Post
    Thanks, and is the logo small on the slipcase or the box?
    Both, and the logo on the slip cover is skewed too much.

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    Quote Originally Posted by MattStar View Post
    Both, and the logo on the slip cover is skewed too much.
    Here's an update on the front:

    I will soon update the slipcover as well. Also should I completely remove the logo on the slipcover?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Deathmania View Post
    Here's an update on the front:
    [IMG]
    I will soon update the slipcover as well. Also should I completely remove the logo on the slipcover?
    Update looks good.

    I wouldn't lose the logo on the slip cover. Think of it on store shelves. You would need to see what game it is.

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    Quote Originally Posted by MattStar View Post
    Update looks good.

    I wouldn't lose the logo on the slip cover. Think of it on store shelves. You would need to see what game it is.
    Thanks for the tip, and does this look any better:

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    What is this exactly, a poster?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Throavium View Post
    What is this exactly, a poster?
    Its the slipcover, unless you mean the source of the images. As for the source, I got them from this trailer (images at 50 seconds in) then I 3d formatted them and thus I got this.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Deathmania View Post
    Its the slipcover
    Oh, looks good.

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    Update:

    Ignore the bad 3d, I am not going to be using this in my final presentation.

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    I like the cover but I feel the logo is still too small I'd swap Sweet Tooth with Kratos and reflect Fratos vertically and then swap Nathan with the Helghast which would then allow you to enlarge the logo so it overlaps without effecting the other images.

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    Why does the logo have to be in one of those circle things too? You could make it a lot bigger and it would look much better in my opinion.
    Quote Originally Posted by Mub View Post
    jesus its like a book telling me i can't read the other half because i bought it in a yard sale

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    How about now:
    Last edited by Deathmania; 06-24-2012 at 10:36 AM.

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    Much better.

    On the back, I would use a different font. The grunge look doesn't fit the box. Also, you shouldn't use all caps and a stylized font for the body text (the description) it makes the text too hard to read.

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    Update:

    Credits to Deiviuxs and Sens for the template.
    Last edited by Deathmania; 06-12-2012 at 02:14 PM.

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    The spine font doesn't fit, I suggest you just cut up the logo word by word and align them in one straight line to fit on the spine. The back is very empty in certain parts.

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    I don't like the back. Why the tagline "Your fight begins now" looks like it's leaving too much vague space on the sides... and I think it should have those stuff normally put on the back, like copyright stuff and ESRB...

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    How about now:

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    Anybody?

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