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Thread: Devil May Cry HD Collection [Lamp]

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    Default Devil May Cry HD Collection [Lamp]

    Been wanting to make this for a while, I've had the idea for...Geez, must be about a year now and I haven't bothered making it until now:



    This is something I really want to get right, but I'm not sure how to proceed with the back (I never do, really.) Any tips?

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    Stylish! indeed

    I think a small synopsis and some features will do.

    maybe you could also add the codes (I don't excactly know what they truly are) you've used on the front background onto the back?

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    Looks like a book based on the anime... because you used the DMC anime artwork, but whatever. It's good...

    I only suggest you to use another font in the "Stylish" because this doesn't suits well. Try out something similar to this one: http://www.gossipgamers.com/wp-conte...akuza_logo.jpg
    Last edited by Higashi89; 06-10-2012 at 06:00 AM.

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    Taking a different approach for the back entirely:


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    Good.

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    Nice.

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    Too text-heavy?


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    Yeah, I think so. The problem seems that the text is to close to eachother imo.

    What size did you use for the text? maybe change the size to give it some more space in between.

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    What happened to the screenshots?

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    The descriptive text also doesn't read that well. It seems liek Wikipedia or Pre-Release info. If anything, I;d say give a short description of the story and then a few features

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    Back to the drawing board!

    Quote Originally Posted by Throavium View Post
    What happened to the screenshots?
    I got rid of them because I didn't think they looked very good.

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    The screenshots being there is more appealing than walls of text, you can balance both together.

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    Is this a step in the right direction? Should I use normal screenshots or keep like this?


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    Try that text with a centre justification maybe? and shrink the text a little so it's not just the 2 words on the bottom line.

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    Get rid of the logos at the bottom of the back, they look really out of place. Other than that, I love this!

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    Something like this:


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    Thanks Thro, I think I've cracked it:

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    Quote Originally Posted by AgentLampshade View Post
    Thanks Thro, I think I've cracked it:

    That.

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    Ready to post?


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    It looks like you've already made your choiche by yourself, Jackpot! lol

    seriously, a lot has improved since the first version, great job on taking the feedback and make these changes, it's certainly ready imo.

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