[$nake] Datura WiP

[$nake]

Alright so I haven't made a box in a while and I've been playing some PS3 games recently, including one of my personal favorites, Datura. I really like the art style and the mystery of the game. I really want to add a datura plant in the center on the ground but I can't seem to find a good picture of a plant to render or a good render in general. If someone could help me with that it would be much appreciated. I also want to find a good render or a good picture to render of the pig as well. I also have a few ideas for the back but here's what I have so far:

[woopwoop11]

Glad to see you back. Try to make the logo stand out more.

[$nake]

Glad to see you back. Try to make the logo stand out more.

Alright I'll darken the shadow and bring it out a little more. Anyone have any luck with the datura plant render?

[$nake]

Here's an update:



Still looking for that Datura plant render if anyone gets the chance! Will credit for the render

[$nake]

I found a pic to render for the Datura plant. I feel confident that this is almost done, what do you guys think? Here's another update:

[woopwoop11]

The arrangement of the screens and text on the back needs to be improved.

[$nake]

The arrangement of the screens and text on the back needs to be improved.

How's this? New update:

[$nake]

Here's a 3D version:

[Higashi89]

It looks boring. Try to increase the contrast.

[$nake]

It looks boring. Try to increase the contrast.

How's this?

[$nake]

Anyone?

[Spiderpig24]

The flower on the front looks pretty out of place, and I think there could be a better font choice for the back.

[Deividas]

The flower image on the front really doesnt not work out to well on the front because it sticks out too much, clearly cause of the different art styles. And its a bit...boring for a front. Remember you want the front to draw the most attention and catch the eye of the viewer. The back is very generic. You want the tagline to stand out a lot more. Then if you are going to put reviews on there, you want them to stand out more as well, make them bigger, randomize the order and size and make them have maybe more color and such instead of being the same as every other text on there. And the screenshots take up way too much space and there are far too many of them. Hope that helps

[$nake]

The flower on the front looks pretty out of place, and I think there could be a better font choice for the back.

Any good fonts in mind that would flow really well? I'm thinking maybe a mystic font or something of the sort

The flower image on the front really doesnt not work out to well on the front because it sticks out too much, clearly cause of the different art styles. And its a bit...boring for a front. Remember you want the front to draw the most attention and catch the eye of the viewer. The back is very generic. You want the tagline to stand out a lot more. Then if you are going to put reviews on there, you want them to stand out more as well, make them bigger, randomize the order and size and make them have maybe more color and such instead of being the same as every other text on there. And the screenshots take up way too much space and there are far too many of them. Hope that helps

Thanks for the feedback man. Yeah I'll definitely reorganize the whole box and see what I can result from it all