The Hobbit WIP

[Deathmania]

Front:

Back:

[Deividas]

Preety neat actually. Only thing is that, the style and fell of it are very similar to your last box. The whole script writing on paper thing and the color scheme and all.

[RoarShark]

The Hobbit has nothing to do with the ring, so the tagline doesn't fit. Other than that it looks great!

[Deathmania]

Preety neat actually. Only thing is that, the style and fell of it are very similar to your last box. The whole script writing on paper thing and the color scheme and all.

Thanks and I think the style suits the medieval times so I decided to incorporate the style in this box aswell.

The Hobbit has nothing to do with the ring, so the tagline doesn't fit. Other than that it looks great!

Thanks and any suggestions for the tagline? With so less information released about the hobbit it is hard to think of a tagline.

[woopwoop11]

Make the Hobbit logo more visible. It's too faded right now.

[Deathmania]

Make the Hobbit logo more visible. It's too faded right now.

How about now:

[woopwoop11]

Better, but I think it should be 100% opacity above the rest of the layers

[Deathmania]

Better, but I think it should be 100% opacity above the rest of the layers

[YoshiStar]

Ooh, awesome. I say increase the opacity of the silhouetted stuff (dragon, people, mountains and all) too. Currently it looks like some kind of background rather than a focal point.

[D_Nikolaos]

this is just a small personal gripe, it doesn't hurt your cover at all, but the fact that you're using an eastern styled Dragon scroll on a western styled story for me clashes. Although like I said the look and feel of it doesn't hurt your work, I only noticed upon close inspection, but now I can't unsee it.

Kudos on the work thus far though! XD

And btw who's sword was that on the back in your fist post? It looked kind of like a knock-off of the Frostmorne.

[Deathmania]

Ooh, awesome. I say increase the opacity of the silhouetted stuff (dragon, people, mountains and all) too. Currently it looks like some kind of background rather than a focal point.

Done.

this is just a small personal gripe, it doesn't hurt your cover at all, but the fact that you're using an eastern styled Dragon scroll on a western styled story for me clashes. Although like I said the look and feel of it doesn't hurt your work, I only noticed upon close inspection, but now I can't unsee it.

Kudos on the work thus far though! XD

And btw who's sword was that on the back in your fist post? It looked kind of like a knock-off of the Frostmorne.

Changed the dragon and I am not sure what sword is on the back but I am probably going to replace it with something else.

[twoxT]

Looks good.

[YoshiStar]

Uhh ... the dragon says "DEVIANTART" on him hahah.

[Deathmania]

Looks good.

Thanks.

Uhh ... the dragon says "DEVIANTART" on him hahah.

Well shit, I cant see it (probably cause my computers brightness is low or something) anyway after hours of searching through google images, I finally found the guy. So yeah here's the dragon silhouette and here's his page.

[Deathmania]

A little update on the front and I am going to start the back from scratch because I just bought a new computer and forgot to transfer the back of the box, so any ideas for the back would be highly appreciated.

[Bastart]

I actually liked the previous Dragon a lot better :/

[Deathmania]

I actually liked the previous Dragon a lot better :/

Well, i couldn't put the previous dragon on because its a Chinese one, instead I changed the dragon and I also started on the back.

[Deathmania]

A little update on the back.
Any Comments?

[Martiniii332]

I think the silhouette on the far left of the front could use a bit more opacity, it seems a bit off from the others. As for the back, I have no complaints, good job so far.

[Deathmania]

I think the silhouette on the far left of the front could use a bit more opacity, it seems a bit off from the others. As for the back, I have no complaints, good job so far.

That is because of the light his staff is giving off. And thanks for the comment.