[WIP] Pokemon for Ps3 [Pokemon NEON]

[takamura97]

So this my latest bozx that i hve been working on, i'm really happy with the front, just started the back but still have no clue n what to do there

also, I know this is an impossible game, that nintendo would never publish pokémon in the ps3 but i wanted to try something different...

Please give me feedback so i can improve this.

[takamura97]

anyone? please

[Throavium]

That looks fantastic. Why PS3?

[Pleiades]

This is one of the better examples of using fan artwork I've seen on the site. And it strays from the usual Pokemon layout that's become so tiresome. I'm see a good amount of potential in this.

My concerns lie with the logo on the front, and the screenshots on the back. The "NEON" subtitle comes off looking a bit tacky, mainly due to the emboss and purple glow. Something more akin to the official logos, slanted white text, could work better. As for the screenshots, the collage is fine but the borders suffer a similar issue to the logo. The purple glow is a bit strong, and the grey a little too thick.

Otherwise, I'm liking it.

[takamura97]

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you're right, i really suck at making logos and the border was just an experience i probably won't use that display of screenshots. Whhat font should i use to the neon part (impact or something boldy like that)?

[roza]

Mostly what Pleiades said.
I'll start on the front, the layout and idea is great, but the 'Neon' feels fairly tacky, and the Mew/Mewtwo in the background don't feel like they belong, the art style doesn't match with the rest of the art on the front, also I can see where Mewtwo cuts off behind Venasaur, and the shadows on the front seem too strong, everything else has been said. But this is really promising. The PS3 choice is still confusing too. I'll keep an eye out.

[takamura97]

That looks fantastic. Why PS3?

for no particular reason... ps3 is my favorite gaming system

[White_Dove]

Got to agree with the others, the Meow looks out of place in this box. The Neon in the logo could look better, its't not blending with the whole thing. I really like the back and see great potential for it just the screenshots seem to be strange to me, maybe it's the borders. I actually like that you used fanart, Ash looks much better.

[takamura97]

ok, changed the logo(how is it?) changed the back to (is the tagline too cheesy? i wanted to emphasize the mew mewto thing darkness light etc..) thinking of maiking this move compatible and then i could more things to the back. So overall how is it going?

also abourb the mew, if anyone is good at rendering i posted an image of mew that would fit the artstyle of mewtwo, if anyone wants to help out (cuz im no good at rendering) i posted in the Resources Forums (thanks

[Mtp]

ok, changed the logo(how is it?) changed the back to (is the tagline too cheesy? i wanted to emphasize the mew mewto thing darkness light etc..) thinking of maiking this move compatible and then i could more things to the back. So overall how is it going?

also abourb the mew, if anyone is good at rendering i posted an image of mew that would fit the artstyle of mewtwo, if anyone wants to help out (cuz im no good at rendering) i posted in the Resources Forums (thanks

Please, please, please don't use Impact on the back.

[woopwoop11]

Yea, I think you need to find a better font and a better way of implementing the screens. Front looks great though.

[takamura97]

fonts temporary dont stress, sreens are looking pretty bad but i just cant think of a way to placemenet, if you have one please say

[White_Dove]

I don't think the Mew you posted would work well with your box-style. It's hard to render and it's low quality and is half cut. Maybe this Mew would be better. If you want, I can render this for you. I'll also try and fix the quality.

[takamura97]

I don't think the Mew you posted would work well with your box-style. It's hard to render and it's low quality and is half cut. Maybe this Mew would be better. If you want, I can render this for you. I'll also try and fix the quality.

would be great if you could render it, thanks