[twoxT] Kid Icarus Uprising

[twoxT]

Just a little something I did by messing around in GIMP, I think it looks pretty good so far.

[Deividas]

Wow, I really like this. Keep going

[TheNiceGuy]

Nice. First box in a while eh?

[twoxT]

Wow, I really like this. Keep going

Thanks.

Nice. First box in a while eh?

Lol, actually I make a lot of boxes when I mess around in GIMP. It's just that I get lazy and don't put them in the WiP or don't think they're that good.

[Higashi89]

Very vague (just a background with a render)... why don't mix things a little? Like, put a scenario below the clouds or something

[twoxT]

I really like this. Really like the work in the background you did.

Thank you, anything to improve on?

Very vague (just a background with a render)... why don't mix things a little? Like, put a scenario below the clouds or something

Isn't that what most boxes are? Thanks for the suggestion, I'd like to keep this one a little simple but I'll check out how it looks.

[twoxT]

Bump-date! Took me long enough, right?

[woopwoop11]

Im lovin this so far. Make the white text a bit more readable, maybe a stroke.

[beardedwalrus]

Im lovin this so far. Make the white text a bit more readable, maybe a stroke.

This. And move the text away from the side a tad. My OCD is acting up with it not being the same distance from the side as the tagline.

[twoxT]

Im lovin this so far. Make the white text a bit more readable, maybe a stroke.

This. And move the text away from the side a tad. My OCD is acting up with it not being the same distance from the side as the tagline.

Like this, maybe? I changed up the borders around the screens to make them cloud-like.

[Deividas]

Make the text under the screenshots far bigger, they are ridiculously tiny. And maybe do something with that patch of clouds in the middle-right, they look a little too realistic compared to the art style, but thats just a little nit pick. Looks good

[Spiderpig24]

The screenshots are so small. Besides that, I like what you have.

[twoxT]

Update:

[Luigi53]

I'm liking it, except for one thing...


Pit isn't an angle.

[madoublex]

Pit isn't an angle.

He's right, more specifically 90 degrees.

[twoxT]

I'm liking it, except for one thing...


Pit isn't an angle.

That word always gets me. Anyways, I fixed the typo.
EDIT: I saw a couple of problems in the screens so here's an updated update. Is the box ready to post?

[Bastart]

The screens and info beneath it seem to be way to small, if you ask me.