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Thread: TwistRox - Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows Part 2 (NeverJudge/PS3)

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    Default TwistRox - Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows Part 2 (NeverJudge/PS3)

    Hey guys sorry for the long title,
    This is my entry to the NeverJudge Comp. I had originally scrapped it but I thought I would have another go at it.
    As of yet, I have no idea where to put the logo so any help would be appreciated.
    Your feedback is well appreciated, thanks.

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    I`d say fix the levels Harry render for the back.
    Also, it's hard to see the tagline. Other then that I like it.

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    Do you plan on adding a logo on the front? It may be hard to do. Also, like squall said, the render on the back isn't blended well, and the tagline should be more visible.

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    It really does need a logo, but I can't see how you could implement one well without taking away from the effect the front has. As for the back, the levels definitely need some work, and I do agree about the tagline. You may also want to remove some of that text, as there's quite a bit now, and maybe just have a features list or something.

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    I definitely agree with all the suggestions above. Another point to add, I'd suggest to tone down the opacity of the background behind the synopsis, it interferes to much with the white text imo. I don't excactly know where to put the logo either? maybe above the glasses?

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    Update
    Still trying to work out where to put the logo.

    EDIT: I think Harry is a little too orange, I'll tone that down.

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    Wow, back looks soooo much better! However I think you should move the first part of the tag line ("THE END"), lower so it's not that close to the edge of the box.
    What are you going to add under the synopsis?

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    Quote Originally Posted by BacKin5Minutes View Post
    Wow, back looks soooo much better! However I think you should move the first part of the tag line ("THE END"), lower so it's not that close to the edge of the box.
    What are you going to add under the synopsis?
    Ok, thanks. I will be adding a "Features" box or maybe critiques. I'll play around with it.

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    Cool.

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    Much better, the back has more of a professional look now and the level change for Harry is perfect.

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    Theres a reflection of a face in his glasses! hahah was that the guy taking the picture? I don't know if you saw that. xD

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    Big improvement on the back. Do as BackIn5Minutes suggested and move the tagline away from the edge of the box. Also, I think you should darken Harry up a bit on the back. Maybe raise the contrast.

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    Thanks for the suggestions, I'll upload an update shortly.

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    Update
    Not too sure about the "sparkle" but tried what people suggested and I am happy with the outcome.
    Feedback is much appreciated, thanks.

    EDIT: Crap, forgot to move the tagline.
    Last edited by TwistRox; 04-14-2012 at 11:02 PM.

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    Dude I love how it's coming along. Still, move the tagline though.

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    Quote Originally Posted by MattStar View Post
    Dude I love how it's coming along. Still, move the tagline though.
    As I said in my edited sentence, I forgot to move it.

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    Personally I think the rain is unnecessary.

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    I like the rain, but just tone it down a bit.

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