UNCHARTED: Drakes Fortune

[FLYCRAYON]

I have been working on this for a while but i'm not sure if its ready to be uploaded yet if you could let me know what you think that would be great

[Ronthis the Werewolf]

The front is excellent, but the back is too plain. Try adding borders, or drop shadows to the text and screenshots.

[Deividas]

One of the biggest things you wanna stay away from on a front is having the main character on there twice (of course there are exceptions to that and when it actually looks good to have them on more than once)...So I would suggest to change up the front. As for the back. The tagline could stand out more and decrease the size of the text. Having one paragraph that takes up half of the entire back looks very childish and unprofessional, at least in this case. So work on those things

[Bastart]

Try using a different kind of font (one that's easier to the eyes) for the synopsis, right now it's the same as the header.

[stevencho]

Needs a more legible font for the description.

[Spiderpig24]

You have the layout down, but there are a few issues I currently have.
- Tagline could have a more suitable font
- Text could be displayed in a proper text box with a better font choice, and may even be less text heavy.
- Two Drake's on the front is a bad decision to make. It only makes the viewer more confused and looks unprofessional

[ZombieDeadpool8]

You have the layout down, but there are a few issues I currently have.
- Tagline could have a more suitable font
- Text could be displayed in a proper text box with a better font choice, and may even be less text heavy.
- Two Drake's on the front is a bad decision to make. It only makes the viewer more confused and looks unprofessional

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Can I just say how much you have improved over the time you have been on VGBA. Good on you for persevering and therefore,you are improving over time.

[stevencho]

You have the layout down, but there are a few issues I currently have.
- Tagline could have a more suitable font
- Text could be displayed in a proper text box with a better font choice, and may even be less text heavy.
- Two Drake's on the front is a bad decision to make. It only makes the viewer more confused and looks unprofessional

-The tagline could also be larger and more prominent
-The description text is also being hidden by Drake on the back.
-I would also recommend changing the background on the front to something that's more exciting and doesn't have a second Drake in it.

[FLYCRAYON]

Alright so this is what i had come up with what you had suggested i do to improve. However i did not quite understand what you had meant by adding text boarders, if you could clarify what you had meant it would be much appreciated.


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[Bastart]

Alright so this is what i had come up with what you had suggested i do to improve. However i did not quite understand what you had meant by adding text boarders, if you could clarify what you had meant it would be much appreciated.


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The front has definitely improved! but the back still got the same issue (The synopsis text is wat to heavy and similair to the tagline font)
and a minor thing, the Blu-Ray icon ect. looks like to be a mess :/ their either to close to eachother or different in size, try to fix that.

[Spiderpig24]

I would still have to say the same I said in my previous critique about the back text. The font selection could really be improved, and a proper text box would really help this out. As for the front, it's better but I think the logo could be moved down some. One of the biggest problems I see with boxes after they are put in 3D is that the image on the spine isn't skewed right. if you look at the front and spine, his hand isn't angled anymore at all, but the spine is at least angled 45 degrees. The same goes for the rest of the image, but it's easier to spot in the hand. If you are going to 3D the box, at least skew the images correctly and non just the template and logos.