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    Default TwistRox - AC Revelations

    Got this idea and this is what came from that. Tried to mix up the logo a bit. I'm not too sure about Altair and the writing but let me know what you think, thanks.
    Your feedback is much appreciated.

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    It's a really cool idea, but I'm not digging the color of the text (white would look way better) or the transparent image of the guy in the background. The UBISOFT logo also looks a bit strange like that.

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    Quote Originally Posted by YoshiStar View Post
    It's a really cool idea, but I'm not digging the color of the text (white would look way better) or the transparent image of the guy in the background. The UBISOFT logo also looks a bit strange like that.
    Ok, I'll play around with the logo and remove Altair. What makes the ubisoft logo strange?

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    Back background is just a placeholder, or is it? I played around with the logo, removed Altair, and started on the back.
    Let me know what you think. Your feedback is much appreciated.

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    Quote Originally Posted by TwistRox View Post
    Update
    Back background is just a placeholder, or is it? I played around with the logo, removed Altair, and started on the back.
    Let me know what you think. Your feedback is much appreciated.
    Great concept, but why did you removed Altair from the front? it's has far less depth without him on the front :/
    The logo is very hard to read, I'd suggest to tone down the opacity of the text behind the logo. I also agree with
    YoshiStar about the Ubisoft logo (the colors kinda clash to much) it looks better if you use the original logo imo .

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    The back looks great. I don't know how I feel about the text on the front though :/

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    Update
    Slightly changed the logo, toned down the opacity of the quote, changed the back's background and colour tone, and added a synopsis.
    Your feedback is much appreciated, thanks.

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    It's cool, but try to increase the brightness in the front, do a overlay or something to focus the character of the front, because since he's blue and the background is blue, it merges with it a little and it's a problem for me.

    Are you focusing in the orange-blue scheme? Since the front is all blue and the back is all orange...

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    It seems like you're trying to go for two different styles here. Not only is there a vast color difference between the front and back, but they look like they belong on two completely different boxes (Mainly due to the overuse of text effects on the front). As for the front of the box, the blue color scheme looks good but I really dislike the text overlay on the entire image. To me it makes it look like a mess, and the logo is pretty hard to read because of it as well. As for the back, I think it's much much better, both in style and in execution. The color scheme is something a little different than the usual theme for AC, but it looks really good and everything goes together well. The text effect you used on the tagline looks pretty awesome, but the rows of text aren't exactly centered (Move the word "Revealed" over to the left a few pixels, and possibly the second row as well so everything is lined up with the top row). Honestly, I love the back and I think you should go after the front in the same style, ditching the background text effects.
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    I know it might be a big jump since you've been using it since the start, but I would try just ditching the text on the front altogether. It just doesn't work for me. :/

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    Ok, I'll ditch the quote on the front. So should I make the front and back flow better or keep the color scheme as is?

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    Definitely don't change the back. But you could try throwing in some more orange on the front.

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    Update
    Sorry for the delay.

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    Better, but I still really dislike the insane color difference between the front and back. Like I said before, it looks like they belong on two different boxes.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Spiderpig24 View Post
    Better, but I still really dislike the insane color difference between the front and back. Like I said before, it looks like they belong on two different boxes.
    What if I said it represented the change in time that is present in the game?

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    Update
    Tried to incorporate some orange to the front, is it better?

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    Not bad but few things I would change:
    a) remove 3D logo from the front
    b) make Ubi logo red (the circle, not the letters).
    c) do not capitalize description and justify align it
    d) maybe add some scanlines or something to spice up the background

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    @ deiviuxs:
    a) remove 3D logo from the front.
    Done
    b) make Ubi logo red (the circle, not the letters).
    Done
    c) do not capitalize description and justify align it.
    The font is already in capitals. Do you suggest a new font?
    d) maybe add some scanlines or something to spice up the background.
    I'm not sure it would fit with the game, though I'm not entirely sure because I haven't played it. I will try it.

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    Update
    Some small changes to the background.

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    UPDATE
    Found a blue-ish background for continuity sake and re-arranged the tagline. The more I look at the effect, the more I dislike it.

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