Mass Effect 2 - Back to square one

[Abrao]

Ok, I received some critics for my Mass Effect 2 cover, and I don't blame anybody. But I know now something is not right with it. I fixed the background color for the text on the back, but what else does not work? What would you change if you were at my computer?

Do not tell me it is ok or good, it is not. I want the truth, even if it is harsh.

Do not take care of the sticker, it is here only to avoid thieves. I will remove it when done.

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[swe 08]

It's not bad, but it's pretty boring. I think you should remove/reduce the glow around the logo, and redesign the layout on the back (keep the same style, it looks perfect for ME2).

[Abrao]

Thanks for the comments, it hurts but at least I progress.

Here's my new idea for the back. The sketch is below and of course, it's not over yet. You see Shepard's file with the reflection of the Illusive Man looking at it and ready to launch the Lazarus project. Two buttons remains to be done for that. Plus. in the background, you see the Collector's ship , and a short description on the right side with Legion and Kasumi.

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So? Is the layout better now?

[Abrao]

Major changes on the front. To stick to the dark and desperate feel, I put instead a picture of the destruction of the Normandy with the distress message of Joker. Add to the fact Shepard got the mention killed in action and the new faces of the squad, it should intrigue people.

So? Good? No good? Other changes to make?

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