Kirby's Adventure (Fully-Custom)

[waterlordo]

This is going to be my 2nd fully custom box so far I think I did pretty good on the Waddle-Dee and Kirby Renders, but what do YOU think of THE BOX ?!?! ;D



Enjoy , and PLLLLEEEAASSSEE Tell me what you Think !

[waterlordo]

UPDATE , Even though no one is helping xD



Is This Better Guys? Loll

[JoeyTheHedgehog]

Looks awesome! Looks ready to upload.

[waterlordo]

Looks awesome! Looks ready to upload.

Thanks , It means alot coming from a great custom boxartist

[JoeyTheHedgehog]

Thanks , It means alot coming from a great custom boxartist

Thanks. The custom art on your box is great!

[woopwoop11]

I think you should work on putting more detail into the backgrounds. Also, you should try to find a better font and I don't particularly like the dual font color.

[Manuel_Alejandro95]

I like it, though I think the renders, and the art overall, could use some shadows and lights here and there, as right now it looks way too plain. I'd also suggest to make the logo and the art match, because they do not right now. Gotta point out that Waddle Dee isn't actually perfectly rounded, he has more kinda pear-shape, and it's kinda disturbing the way he looks on the back, sideways, as he shouldn't have that red stroke all across the border, judging by his position. Once again, I think the back's typography, overall, is very unnatractive; the colors doesn't look good, that red blends too much with the background (Which is also too simple, add clouds or something), the font is way too big, and it's hard to read, try choosing a bolder one and reduce the size; try reading some tutorial, here and here are two that I found useful. Kirby's actually of a lighter pink, btw, the one you used is way too strong.

I like where this is going, but the collision of vibrant colors, plus the unproffesional text on the back and the things I cited above make this very unpleasant to the eye.

[waterlordo]

Update ... I Tried to make it as better as I possibly could but I admit I have troubles doing back's for boxes xD



So Nooowww what do you guys think ?

[jevangod]

I like it. The back could use some more work. Maybe some screenshots. Sorry I couldn't make the logo, I've been busy.

[waterlordo]

I like it. The back could use some more work. Maybe some screenshots. Sorry I couldn't make the logo, I've been busy.

Thanks , and Don't Worry it's not that big of a problem

[waterlordo]

UPDATE TIIIIIMMMMEEE!!! So Here it is, it might be my final update but i'm not sure, I am stuck and don't know what else to improve on xD So Take A Look...



So Now what do you guys think ?!