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07-28-2011, 01:33 AM #1
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[SOS2011] Sonic the hedgehog - Rapture
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07-28-2011, 01:37 AM #2
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The screenshots should have some kind of screen borders
I've learnt how to type now, it's all good
And no, I'm not here to start a flame war (again).
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07-28-2011, 04:52 AM #3
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This. It's looking pretty good with that custom art!
Originally Posted by LaserSonic1029
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07-28-2011, 05:37 AM #4
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It's looking pretty good! Like Lasersonic said, you should have a border on the screen shots.
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07-28-2011, 08:04 AM #5
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The "Everyone" ESRB doesn't have that description thing in the box , other than that and putting borders on the screenshots I'd say it looks Awesome! And May I make a suggestion for the Borders?
Here it is: http://www.vgboxart.com/resource/580/sonic/?replies=3
I've used these before I think they are pretty cool :P
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07-28-2011, 08:17 AM #6
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The second screenshot is from Sonic the Hedgehog 2
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07-29-2011, 12:01 AM #7
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07-29-2011, 04:05 AM #8
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The Borders for the Screenshot are really Choppy, and the back doesn't look that interesting, Why don't you try using an outer glow or something ? The Front looks fine though , And Good Luck in the Competition !
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07-29-2011, 05:44 AM #9
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The borders are really blurry.
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07-30-2011, 11:07 AM #10
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The front is cool, but the back needs some renders of Sonic on it (or any other character, like Eggman).
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08-02-2011, 02:47 PM #11
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Ok, the others pointed it out: The borders are choppy and the ingame screens get rather small, don't they? Other than that I'd say you should change the fonts on the back. The one on the top is... okaaayyh, but I the one beside the sonic heads is really overused and dull.
The front is really great though, I love these retro-boxes! Keep up the good work!
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08-03-2011, 06:58 AM #12
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Should I post?
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08-03-2011, 07:06 AM #13
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