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Thread: My First Box: Jurassic Park WiP

  1. 06-19-2011, 04:11 PM #1
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    Default My First Box: Jurassic Park WiP

    I meant to say my first SNES box in the title. Here it is:



    What do you guys think so far?
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  2. 06-19-2011, 04:14 PM #2
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    I was going to comment... then I saw the "Watson for Mod" surrounded by pot in your sig, and I decided my efforts in attempting to improve your work in any way would be wasted because you would be too high to actually take anything from the comment.
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    Quote Originally Posted by TheKoopaDasher View Post
    I was going to comment... then I saw the "Watson for Mod" surrounded by pot in your sig, and I decided my efforts in attempting to improve your work in any way would be wasted because you would be too high to actually take anything from the comment.
    I'm 100% sober at the moment, so please lay down the critique
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  4. 06-19-2011, 04:18 PM #4
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    Quote Originally Posted by xXStiffyJiffyXx View Post
    I'm 100% sober at the moment, so please lay down the critique
    Hmm... well, what you could do is...

    Actually, if I critique your work there's a good chance you'll be here longer than if I just ignore you... Never mind.
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    Quote Originally Posted by TheKoopaDasher View Post
    Actually, if I critique your work there's a good chance you'll be here longer than if I just ignore you... Never mind.
    I'll be here even if you don't critique my work so it's probably better if you do criqitue my work kthanx
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    I like the way you blended the logo in on the front. What style are you trying to do for the back?
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  7. 06-19-2011, 04:21 PM #7
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    Quote Originally Posted by xXStiffyJiffyXx View Post
    I'll be here even if you don't critique my work so it's probably better if you do criqitue my work kthanx
    I'm trying, but every time I make the attempt I keep remembering what a jackass you are when you're "high"... which is apparently every other hour but this one. And then I just lose all interest in helping you.
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    Quote Originally Posted by BioHazard-92 View Post
    I like the way you blended the logo in on the front. What style are you trying to do for the back?
    Thank you I'm probably going to do a simple SNES back. A few screenshots with some text. I'll have more in the next update


    Quote Originally Posted by TheKoopaDasher View Post
    I'm trying, but every time I make the attempt I keep remembering what a jackass you are when you're "high"... which is apparently every other hour but this one. And then I just lose all interest in helping you.
    Well the cop took my fucking weed so I can't get high atm so please just freakin' critique my work like a good member!
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  9. 06-19-2011, 04:29 PM #9
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    Quote Originally Posted by xXStiffyJiffyXx View Post
    Well the cop took my fucking weed so I can't get high atm so please just freakin' critique my work like a good member!
    Well, you should still have enough. I mean, if he only took your fucking weed, you should still have your school weed and your VGBA weed and your driving weed and your video game weed and your nighttime sniffling sneezing best sleep you ever got high weed, right?
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    Quote Originally Posted by TheKoopaDasher View Post
    your nighttime sniffling sneezing best sleep you ever got high weed, right?
    lol rep+

    But seriously, I aint got no fucking weed! Now critique good sir!
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  11. 06-19-2011, 04:37 PM #11
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    Quote Originally Posted by xXStiffyJiffyXx View Post
    lol rep+

    But seriously, I aint got no fucking weed! Now critique good sir!
    Yes, we're aware that you are out of fucking weed, and I'm sure whoever it is you will be fucking tonight and then telling us about later will be sorely disappointed that you ran out of fucking weed and won't be high when you're fucking. But you should still have your other non-fucking weed.
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    Quote Originally Posted by TheKoopaDasher View Post
    Yes, we're aware that you are out of fucking weed, and I'm sure whoever it is you will be fucking tonight and then telling us about later will be sorely disappointed that you ran out of fucking weed and won't be high when you're fucking. But you should still have your other non-fucking weed.
    And people wonder why I troll this site when there's intelligent members like Koopa...-_____________-
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    Quote Originally Posted by xXStiffyJiffyXx View Post
    And people wonder why I troll this site when there's intelligent members like Koopa...-_____________-
    You do realize I'm sarcastically trolling you for being such a dipshit, right?
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    Quote Originally Posted by TheKoopaDasher View Post
    You do realize I'm sarcastically trolling you for being such a dipshit, right?
    Whatever. Fucking hypocrite

    Anyways, UPDATE:

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    I don't mind the front but it needs something else. My suggestion would to maybe ad some foliage to the front, sort of give it that jungle atmosphere, with the logo acting as like a carving in stone behind it.

    As for the back, its looking a lot like the official so far so i'll wait until you've got some a bit more complete. I'm hoping you move away from the look you've got now though (ie: less like the official back).

    EDIT: I posted this before you posted you're update:

    Get rid of that back and try something else, it looks a lot like the official.
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    It's done since I can't get any good critique from anyone here obviously.

    http://www.vgboxart.com/view/43174/j...ark/?replies=1

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    Posted before I saw your comment reza :P thank you for some advice at least
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