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Thread: Paper Mario Bros. WiP

  1. #1
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    Default Paper Mario Bros. WiP

    It's not near finished, I just wanted you guys' opinions so far:

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    Wow, this looks really good. Only quip so far is that it's empty, and Luigi's L is backward. Also, make it E for Everyone.

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    My main problem with it is that the proportions confuse me. I mean, the piranha plant is huge compared to the tree, and the blocks are too big for the plant.


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    It takes a simple arrangement and it works here. Although it does seem like the subjects were just thrown in. Maybe make them integrate with the background more.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Marioshi View Post
    the thing i don't get is why peach looks as if she's floating mid air
    Because she is floating mid air...

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    Quote Originally Posted by stevencho View Post
    Because she is floating mid air...
    lol

    The box is good, I guess, but it's pretty generic.

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    Still working on this, it looks a lot different now.
    I'll post an update soon.

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