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Thread: Heavy Rain WiP by MattStar

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    Default Heavy Rain WiP by MattStar

    Hey what do you guys think so far?

    http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/2846/caseo.png

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    Good, try to find a more creative way to place the screenshots.

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    Looks good! Altough I agree with Sentroavium about the screenshots. The hole back design is pretty boring right now.
    Can't wait to see more of this!

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    Thanks guys, I definitely will rearrange the back, I wanted a clean feel but it doesn't look right as is. I guess I play around until something awesome comes along.

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    I like the front but dislike the back.

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    Quote Originally Posted by deiviuxs View Post
    I like the front but dislike the back.
    This is really not helping.

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    Quote Originally Posted by deiviuxs View Post
    I like the front but dislike the back.
    I know, it's extremely unfinished and will probably be scrapped. I have an idea for a better design on the back, so I'll start on that.

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    I'm lost on the back... anyone have advice?

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    Little update. Is it looking better?

    http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/9688/case2.png

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    Quote Originally Posted by MattStar View Post
    Little update. Is it looking better?
    I think that the second darker one looks better, but the back seems a bit empty to me. Maybe put an origami figure behind the text or something? Also, I love how you did the rain drop effect on the front. It really matches the game!

    Now back to my FF XIII-2 box.
    "This is the way the world ends: Not with a bang but a whimper." -T.S. Eliot

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    I really love what you have done with the 'thoughts' around Ethan on the front. Fantastic!

    The screenshots look much better on the back now. Just need to work on the placement of the text on the back as under the screenshots looks quite empty (as said above).

    Maybe move the text up to the bottom of the screenshots then add another line of screenshots?

    Don't forget the blue Move compatible strip on the front top (unless you aren't adding that because it says "move edition"). ;-)

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    Would be really awesome if you could make the screenshots to a "circle" that goes around Madison (the woman). Do you get what I mean?

    Edit: Imagine the blue squares as different screenshots. Maybe you will have grunge them up in the edges. Maybe this won't work at all, but I think it's worth a try... :P


    Last edited by Spiner_; 02-17-2011 at 12:56 AM.

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    Thanks Spiner, I'll try that.

    And thanks FMD and Vanilla, just saying, I planned on adding more to the back, that why its a WiP haha.

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    Hey I'm just plain old failing on that screen idea. No way I place them looks right. Maybe you could use that on a future project of yours Spiner...

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    Quote Originally Posted by MattStar View Post
    Hey I'm just plain old failing on that screen idea. No way I place them looks right. Maybe you could use that on a future project of yours Spiner...
    Okey... I don't really know how I could help you, but try to paint some kind of circle, and it might be easier to place them out. (check my picture)
    You don't have to do it if you don't want, though :P


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    Ok looks done to me, what do you think?

    http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/9688/case2.png

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    Quote Originally Posted by MattStar View Post
    Ok looks done to me, what do you think?

    http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/9688/case2.png

    Yep, I'd say it is. Guaranteed Fav from me.
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    sexy. but i do not like the move edition text beneath the logo

    just call it heavy rain

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    Quote Originally Posted by spypilot View Post
    sexy. but i do not like the move edition text beneath the logo

    just call it heavy rain
    There actually is a move edition... see

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    I have to agree with Spypilot. The Move Edition part looks kinda tacky. Love the box, btw.

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