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Thread: (90sKid) Red Faction: Armageddon WiP

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    Default (90sKid) Red Faction: Armageddon WiP

    So here's my latest.
    Right now, the thing I'm most concerned about is the logo and its placement.
    As always, please leave critique.


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    The box isn't showing up for me.

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    Oooh.... that is GOOD looking. Continue.

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    The box looks great. But the only issue I see is the head of the guy needs to be blended more into the background, you can see the edge.
    Huh?

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    Quote Originally Posted by LooseJuice View Post
    The box isn't showing up for me.
    Strange..

    Quote Originally Posted by Hatty View Post
    Oooh.... that is GOOD looking. Continue.
    Thanks, Hatty.

    Quote Originally Posted by RoarShark View Post
    The box looks great. But the only issue I see is the head of the guy needs to be blended more into the background, you can see the edge.
    Thank you. I'll fix that.

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    This is really cool but I would like to see more texture work and color (work some blue in there, it'll pop) and a little more lighting. It's really dark up by his face, I can barely see it.

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    Quote Originally Posted by RoarShark View Post
    The box looks great. But the only issue I see is the head of the guy needs to be blended more into the background, you can see the edge.

    Quote Originally Posted by LooseJuice View Post
    This is really cool but I would like to see more texture work and color (work some blue in there, it'll pop) and a little more lighting. It's really dark up by his face, I can barely see it.
    OK, hopefully I've fixed some issues in this update.
    Did away with a photo filter, hiked up the saturation of the background a little, added light texturing and some lighting:


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    The more I look at it...the better the THQ logo looks.

    Box looks fantastic by the way, but me being unfamiliar with the series and its art, it's difficult to see how much effort you actually put into this, but judging by your previous boxes, I'll give you the benefit of the doubt.

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    I can still see part of the edge of the guys head... is it just me? It could just be my screen pulling tricks on me again. But I love the box despite i can see that they guy has a flat head.
    Huh?

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    Back is pretty much done.
    But if you have any problems with it, please do not hesitate to point them out.



    Quality is a lot better than this, btw, I don't know how it got so blurry.

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    Quote Originally Posted by The90sKid View Post
    Quality is a lot better than this, btw, I don't know how it got so blurry.
    Don't use Photobucket, I suggest to try with Imageshack [You can bypass the new filesize limit using the old uploader] or Box.net.

    And as for the box, I'm really liking it now, tough the tagline blends too much with the background and It's kinda hard to read. The overall back feels kind of empty, also.

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    I came

    EDIT: I really like the emptiness. The front is rather simple, and the back matches it well.
    Last edited by beardedwalrus; 02-11-2011 at 09:13 AM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Manuel_Alejandro95 View Post
    The overall back feels kind of empty, also.
    Any specific areas?

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    Quote Originally Posted by beardedwalrus View Post
    I came

    EDIT: I really like the emptiness. The front is rather simple, and the back matches it well.
    Thanks, I am sorta going for the empty look, partly because art for this game is so scarce.

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    Beautiful. I think on the back the "NOWHERE IS SAFE" needs to have either a gradient overlay (similar to the "ARMAGEDDON" on the front) and/or some kind of drop shadow.

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    It looks a bit low quality.

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    Quote Originally Posted by RAiDeN-209 View Post
    Beautiful. I think on the back the "NOWHERE IS SAFE" needs to have either a gradient overlay (similar to the "ARMAGEDDON" on the front) and/or some kind of drop shadow.
    Yeah, fixed that with a black outer glow.

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