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Thread: [xXUpdogXx] Borderlands 2 WiP

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    Smile [xXUpdogXx] Borderlands 2 WiP

    Okay so here's the Borderlands 2 box that I've been working on for the past few days. I want to get some critique and improvements. Here it is so far:

    Last edited by xXUpdogXx; 01-24-2011 at 08:40 AM. Reason: UPDATE

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    I'm liking the look of it. My only suggestion would be that maybe the red portion is a bit much on the front. I think you should keep it, but maybe consider scaling it back a bit.

    Also, I don't see the region marked (it's usually in the upper right corner of the front and/or the bottom of the spine.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Prong1978 View Post
    Also, I don't see the region marked (it's usually in the upper right corner of the front and/or the bottom of the spine.
    You really like that thing don't you.

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    Quote Originally Posted by stevencho View Post
    You really like that thing don't you.
    Not really, but since he has all of the other stuff, its omission is conspicuous.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Prong1978 View Post
    Also, I don't see the region marked (it's usually in the upper right corner of the front and/or the bottom of the spine.
    I'm still working on it. Thats usually one of the last things I add to a box but I'll add it now and include it in the next update! Thank you for the critique

    EDIT: Here's the newest update:

    Last edited by xXUpdogXx; 01-25-2011 at 06:04 AM.

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    I don't like that the main characters are on the front twice.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Daemon View Post
    I don't like that the main characters are on the front twice.
    Agreed. Put that front render on the back over the legal stuff.

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    Here's the newest update!


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    Looking good. However, the text on the back looks odd. The size doesn't look consistent, and the black stroke makes it look fake-ish. I've recently noticed that almost no real boxes use a stroke on the back text. They just use a solid color or they add a light shadow to it to help it stick out.

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    Here's an update that I believe fixed the text problem


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    The text looks a lot better!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Prong1978 View Post
    The text looks a lot better!
    Thanks! Personally I think it's ready to 3D and upload after a couple more tweaks are done. I just finished making the disc. What do you guys think?

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    Uploaded!!! Thank you guys for all your help! Please view it and critique as necessary

    http://www.vgboxart.com/view/41565/b...s.2/?replies=1

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