Halo 4: GraveMind

[jibby2]

Hi there, this is my first box art so please comment and fave.
It took me over 2 days to make this box.

[gamerz]

This is awesome jibby2. By the way do you think some of my art is terrible.

[jibby2]

This is awesome jibby2. By the way do you think some of my art is terrible.

Naah! Some things you just need to take time on. Because if you do a box art like every hour that does get a bit annoying, Some times just listen to what Spiner_ says!!!

[Spiner_]

By the way do you think some of my art is terrible.

There is no way that you are 25...

Okey, the box has potential.
First of the logo on the front is hard to see, maybe make it just plain white?
The description text on the back should also have a more simple font.

[jibby2]

There is no way that you are 25...

Do you like my box art, It doesn't matter if you don't

[jibby2]

There is no way that you are 25...

Okey, the box has potential.
First of the logo on the front is hard to see, maybe make it just plain white?
The description text on the back should also have a more simple font.

I think the box would be more a less look not that good with the logo on the front white, but that's my instinct!

[Hatty]

Listen to spiner. He's a really good, experienced artist and he knows what he's talking about.The logo would look better in white. For the back, get rid of the current tagline, and think of something original, instead of just, prepare for halo 4. Look around for good backgrounds instead of just black. Hope that helps, see what you can change.

[Scatman Steve]

"This time Noble 6 turn against you as you fight alone."

Didn't all of Noble 6 die in Reach??? Why yes, yes they did

[Hatty]

"This time Noble 6 turn against you as you fight alone."

Didn't all of Noble 6 die in Reach??? Why yes, yes they did

It's a fan-made game, that really doesn't matter.

[ClonedX]

Hey, you're not gonna get ANY better. It seems you dont give a shit of the critiques they give you..

Look... I started like a complete noob on this site, but thanks to the people here I'm now a decent artist (ego?)

If I wouldn't have listened any of the guys here, I would still use paint and make like 5 crappy boxes a day. Just... listen to what people say and TRY do it, get another image program like paint.net or if you have some $900 bucks to spare XD get photoshop cs5

[jibby2]

Hey, you're not gonna get ANY better. It seems you dont give a shit of the critiques they give you..

Look... I started like a complete noob on this site, but thanks to the people here I'm now a decent artist (ego?)

If I wouldn't have listened any of the guys here, I would still use paint and make like 5 crappy boxes a day. Just... listen to what people say and TRY do it, get another image program like paint.net or if you have some $900 bucks to spare XD get photoshop cs5

Look dude I do listen to everything

[jibby2]

Listen to spiner. He's a really good, experienced artist and he knows what he's talking about.The logo would look better in white. For the back, get rid of the current tagline, and think of something original, instead of just, prepare for halo 4. Look around for good backgrounds instead of just black. Hope that helps, see what you can change.

Okay, I will do what I can once I've done that I will post the updated version of this

[jibby2]

Okay guys, Here is the updated version of the Halo 4. After listening to what Spiner_ and Hatty said I think it looks a lot better.

[Hatty]

Get rid of that nasty blue gradient on the logo on the front and spine. It clashes with the rest of the box.