The RIDE - A Martin Hunt Film

[HellKnight]

This is my latest venture. I know its not a criterion collection piece because the film only exists in my head, but i liked the simplicity of the criterion design and it fitted my vision pretty well.

I'm with holding the story line and what the movie is actually about until its finished (that and i'm trying to figure out how to summarise it in a few lines haha).

So please any critiques and comments, they are more than welcomed


Thanks, Hellknight

[HellKnight]

I don't mean to bump my own thread, but is there no one who has anything to comment on?

[CoH GHOST 007]

I don't mean to bump my own thread, but is there no one who has anything to comment on?

i never get any help on mine either, so your not alone, but i erally think this is good, if you put the text on the back, it would be faveable

[Manuel_Alejandro95]

I don't like the "And" between Morgan Freeman and Dustin Hoffman.
I don't like the way you rotated the "The" in the title and the bicycles over it.
And the shapes of the buildings look so blurry/bad cut in most parts, I think you should fix that.

[sd1833]

I agree with Manuel, about the buildings, and the text used for the cast. I don't mind the logo though, I actually like the bicyclists on it.

[Eggboy'13]

Can't tell you how much I love this.

[stevencho]

I like the logo.