Final Fantasy Geneca XIII [WIP -Icyfirefists]

[Icyfirefists]

Hi Guys. Im working on a really special project. A CCFFVII type sequel prequel to Final Fantasy XIII(Not FFXIII-2). It will be based on the city of Paddra and the time of the creation of pulse and the creation of Cocoon. I am trying really hard, but i need a lot of help and if you could crit this hard i would be grateful. Oh and please bear with me, i know some of the characters are from random games, but for the sake of the game being so far back in history i didnt want to use the same FFXIII characters.Wouldnt make sense. PS. i know about the angels being slightly chopppy. i will try to fix that. Thanks.

[Icyfirefists]

Ok Ive worked on it a little more. need help me on the front and the back for text.

[ABeautifulDisarray]

This is coming along very well so far I think. However, I know that you want critiques, so:

-First, I feel the logo could be moved down a bit, but that's really a personal preference type of thing.
-The opacity of the two larger characters on the front could be lowered.
-That line on the far left side of the front, the dark one. What is that? To me it looks like it's from a magazine scan, so you might want to get rid of that.
-Moving onto the back, parts of the image are sticking out over the template, and there's a tiny sliver of image to the far left that's darker than the rest.
-The tagline needs to be edited. There are way to many periods; if you have to use periods like that, you should use three at a time (known as an ellipsis, and it looks like "...")
-You could also just rearrange the tagline so that it has "Creation Lies" and then "in Your Hands" beneath, so that it's read the way you wanted it to be without cluttering it up with periods.
-With the screenshots, I think you should arrange them so they aren't so cluttered, and you should add a light border to them too.
-Lastly, the Sega logo beneath the Square Enix one on the back should be taken out, unless you wanted it there, in which case you should add one to the front too.

I hope that this was a good enough critique so that you could put some of the things I said to use!


EDIT: Whoops, I guess you already posted it, I didn't know that. Sorry.