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Thread: Dead Space [white & red] - deiviuxs

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    Exclamation Dead Space [white & red] - deiviuxs

    Decided to go with a slightly different approach for a Dead Space box. Trying to use bright colors instead of the dark ones like most Dead Space boxes use.



    Please let me know what you think - be honest!

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    honestly it really isnt anything special but it is still a good effort.I recomend putting some effects on the front and adding a back.But it looks nice

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    Its too bright for a horror game

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    Quote Originally Posted by falcon_gamer View Post
    Its too bright for a horror game
    It doesn't necessarily have to bright for a horror game, ADFD's Bioshock box is a good example of that. It's not exactly a horror game but it is dark.

    As for the box, it's not bad. The color scheme is somewhat unique for a Dead Space box, but it does look a bit choppy in a few places. I would like to see more of this.
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    The current execution seems too bright

    I would like to see this red/white concept pulled off with a more dull appearance. If that makes any sense.

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    It looks better when you invert the colors.

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    Thanks for your feedback! I have taken it into account and changed the front completely.
    Since you though the front was too bright, I have switched to darker colors. I have also edited the front more to make it not as simple as before.
    Also, I have dropped the red/white scheme and went towards black/brown. If you think I should try different color combination, then let me know, otherwise if you think it fits, then I will probably continue using these colors.



    As always, your feedback is critical to the development of this cover (which will have a back of course).

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    Hmm...not much feedback. I'm guessing it doesn't look good then..?

    Anyways, I have modified the front even more. Let me know what you think!


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    Quote Originally Posted by deiviuxs View Post
    Thanks for your feedback! I have taken it into account and changed the front completely.
    Since you though the front was too bright, I have switched to darker colors. I have also edited the front more to make it not as simple as before.
    Also, I have dropped the red/white scheme and went towards black/brown. If you think I should try different color combination, then let me know, otherwise if you think it fits, then I will probably continue using these colors.



    As always, your feedback is critical to the development of this cover (which will have a back of course).
    Looks awesome man. I love it. It's different, and original. I say lets see the back my man. =)

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    Alright, I started working on a back. Trying to go for something unique while staying close to the front. Let me know what you think!


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    Nice! I don't like the template though. Also, Isaac blends in a strange way in the back.

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    Wow that's looking great! I love the textures you are using, they really add a certain feel to this box, and I think the template adds to it too.
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    The template will stay as it is.
    Isaac blends too much..? Should I lighten him up a bit so he jumps out more.
    Also, any ideas of what I should add more? More text or should I blend some images, 'cause it feels too empty for me right now.

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    Quote Originally Posted by deiviuxs View Post
    The template will stay as it is.
    Isaac blends too much..? Should I lighten him up a bit so he jumps out more.
    Also, any ideas of what I should add more? More text or should I blend some images, 'cause it feels too empty for me right now.
    I think making him brighter would work well. I think a little more text would work, but not too much. The rest could be filled in with blended images or screenshots.
    Quote Originally Posted by Mub View Post
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    Worked some more on the back:
    - brightened Isaac
    - added more text
    - added blended screenshots



    Let me know what you think!

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    I really like how you blended in the screenshots, it worked great. The text at the bottom left doesn't show up very good though, maybe make it the same color as the description?
    Quote Originally Posted by Mub View Post
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    I want each text to have a different look. I agree that the text at the bottom left is hard to read but I actually wanted it to be that way.
    Any other suggestion/changes I should make? Anyone?

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    Quote Originally Posted by deiviuxs View Post
    I want each text to have a different look. I agree that the text at the bottom left is hard to read but I actually wanted it to be that way.
    Any other suggestion/changes I should make? Anyone?
    I don't see anything else I would change, very nice job.
    Quote Originally Posted by Mub View Post
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    Thanks for your feedback, Spiderpig24, but it would be nice to get feedback from someone else too.

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