Uncharted 2 WIP (SP24)

[Spiderpig24]

So I think I've used Photoshop enough to finally try to make a box, and this is what I came up with. How does it look so far?

[RoarShark]

Wow I like this a lot actually. Some part though stick out more than others. The picture of the girl sticks out like a sore thumb, maybe try giving it some color changes. The top part of the Drake pic needs some touch up. It looks odd the way it is, try erasing a bit more on the top.

[Spiderpig24]

Wow I like this a lot actually. Some part though stick out more than others. The picture of the girl sticks out like a sore thumb, maybe try giving it some color changes. The top part of the Drake pic needs some touch up. It looks odd the way it is, try erasing a bit more on the top.

Thanks very much for the critique! I will fix the picture in the next update, what part of the Drake picture needs changing?

[RoarShark]

Thanks very much for the critique! I will fix the picture in the next update, what part of the Drake picture needs changing?

The part in betweeen the compas and the gun.

[Spiderpig24]

The part in betweeen the compas and the gun.

Oh I see. I actually added that part as kind of a hole in the paper, but I can take that out.

[rpgfreak]

This is sweet.

[TwistRox]

Wow,
That is what you call unique!
Amazing cover, keep up the good work!

[coolguy753]

Very nice but I would get rid of Chloe, she really sticks outbadly. I think you only need Drake on the front, put Chloe on the back. I mean, I guess you could try blending Chloe in more and see how that works but I personally would get rid of her altogether.

Are you using CS5?

[Spiderpig24]

Very nice but I would get rid of Chloe, she really sticks outbadly. I think you only need Drake on the front, put Chloe on the back. I mean, I guess you could try blending Chloe in more and see how that works but I personally would get rid of her altogether.

Are you using CS5?

Yeah i'll post two versions in the next update, one with and one without Chloe. i just started using CS5, i've been using Paint.NET so photoshop is kinda hard to get used to lol.

And thanks Rpgfreak and Twistrox!

[Spiderpig24]

Here is an update, one without the picture and one with it. I can't decide between them.

Edit: I forgot to take out the hole in the paper =P
Does anyone else think it would look better without it?

[afifan000]

The first one, without Chloe, is the best one. It looks great.

[mchapra]

Keep Chloe.

[coolguy753]

The pictures aren't showing up for me.

[Spiderpig24]

The pictures aren't showing up for me.

I'll upload to Tinypic to see if that works.
Thanks mchapra and afifan. I'll either keep the pic or replace it with something else and use the pic on the back.

Edit: Here are the boxes on Tinypic

Without Chloe: http://i49.tinypic.com/2pyvs0l.jpg
With Chloe: http://i47.tinypic.com/28u6151.jpg

[Spiner_]

Great work, the one without Chloe is amazing.

[coolguy753]

The one without Chloe looks SO much better.

[Spiderpig24]

I'll keep the one without Chloe. should i replace the picture with something else or keep it like it is?

[afifan000]

Keep it the way it is. Right now, it has a really nice flow to it.

[coolguy753]

Keep it like it is.

[Spudnike]

although it looks a little jumbled, i love it and i'll comment and fav if it gets uploaded.=)