This is pretty good. One thing I would do is change the black background to black, I think that would look better. And maybe try to make the font on the back the same design as the logo. I like the design you're going for with this.
This is looking a lot better. This may or may not be a good idea, but maybe try moving the back tagline to the middle and adding shapes to the top corner of the back like you did with the bottom. Kinda like this: http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/3043/hazema.png
1. I don't know what you mean by the type being "apparently visable"
2. What's a ditto box?
3. What else should I include?
1- Yeah,my apologies for the vocabulary difficulties here.. Second language.
Anyway,I meant to say that it was very obvious in the design.
2- ditto,the same... a very good foundation for a very good box.
3- I have no idea..surprise me.
If I'm honest, I'm not a big fan of the gradient on the back cover - I'd have it all yellow. Obviously, that's just my opinion, whatever floats your boat.
I can't really decide on the positioning of "The Future Is Ours" so I won't comment on that, but my suggestion for your screenshots is to put them inside the hexagons - not all in one row, dot them around (4 maximum) but make sure you leave at least a medium-thick border (yellow) around them.
At TCM, i was working on this and after i finished progress, i checked this thread. I was your comment and laughed because what is below this is what i made before seeing your post and was almost exactly what you said!