Sonic The Hedgehog

[Tallahassee]

Alright, So I haven't played sonic much, but it looked like a fun box to make, I actully tried to edit the characters and do renders for the box, but it totally messed the characters up. So I decided to keep going instead of stopping the box. This need alot of work and I need you guys to help critique it. Here it is

EDITED:

Okay, I decided to fully change the whole box. This is just the template made by me. Anyone wanna help give me some suggestions for the cover?

12/12/09 EDIT:

[ojoe2000]

What program are you using?

[Tallahassee]

Photoshop CS4

[Enchanter]

Photoshop CS4

Noway that's made in Photoshop. That looks like something made in MSPaint.

[Tallahassee]

uhhh not really, dude

[axel_master]

Noway that's made in Photoshop. That looks like something made in MSPaint.

It actually doesn't look like something made in ms paint, for a first box i think it's Okay, Just some flaws.
The template is kind of messed up around the curve, some of the renders are choppy and blurred and the background is kind of plain.
Overall, It's better than my first anyway and i'm sure you'll get better.
Enchanter, Why no constructive criticism? I'm sure if people said your boxes looked like they were made in MS Paint you wouldn't feel happy.
Just be nice to the new people

[del337er]

Ahhh Shadow had one arm!!!!

[Tallahassee]

It actually doesn't look like something made in ms paint, for a first box i think it's Okay, Just some flaws.
The template is kind of messed up around the curve, some of the renders are choppy and blurred and the background is kind of plain.
Overall, It's better than my first anyway and i'm sure you'll get better.
Enchanter, Why no constructive criticism? I'm sure if people said your boxes looked like they were made in MS Paint you wouldn't feel happy.
Just be nice to the new people

Actually, this is my 3rd box submitted on the site. But thank you for being honest and critiquing. I'm gonna fix right now

Ahhh Shadow had one arm!!!!

Haha, Must of accidently chopped that out with my magic wand.

[Tallahassee]

Decided to delete the cover. Heres a template fully made by me



I am gonna put the sonic game in this template

[Tallahassee]

Took around 1 hour 45 mins

[RoarShark]

One thing, use a REAL template, not one you made.

[Tallahassee]

I like the players edition version of the template, though

[mchapra]

http://library.creativecow.net/tutorials/adobephotoshop

[Tallahassee]

Man, I know how to use PS :/



Added a background

[mchapra]

Sorry, But this look's baaad.

[del337er]

No offence man, but take a scroll through the Hall of Fame. Look at the boxes, try to get ideas. You can see that most of the boxes use the real template. And all of the logos are cut out well and they have a good background, not just a solid color. You just need to put alittle more time and effort into your boxes, fix all those little things that you think people wont care about, because we do care, and it makes a difference. Also go to Planetrenders.com for all your renders...they are the best. I believe you should scratch all you have now and start again. Remember, alot of time and alot of effort. Good luck

[RoarShark]

Who cares if you like the red one better, it looks crappy compared to the official. Thus use the official, do you want a color change to the official, i'll do that for you, but please use the official. As for the box its self, its not that good. The background really isn't good, try getting a wallpaper off the internet and take the background off that, add renders from Planet Renders and bada bing you have got your self the beginning of a box. And by the way it doesn't look like you know how to use photoshop.

[Tallahassee]

Totally RE-DONE , What do you think?

[thatguyiknow]

N usually means and. it looks like partners and crime to me

[Tallahassee]

Yup. Tats what it's supposed to mean. As you can see the dark side t the left , good guys to the right.