Tron: Criterion collection

**Trekkie313** · 11-12-2009, 04:29 PM

Here is what I got so far, let me know what you think. Also please leave suggestions!

**tleeart** · 11-12-2009, 04:46 PM

A couple of suggestions: decrease the size of the box for a preview, it's way too large to evaluate. Aside from that, finish up the shot you have on the front of Tron, it bothers me that he's cut off at the thighs. Otherwise, finish it up, it looks great so far.

**Trekkie313** · 11-13-2009, 06:22 AM

I can't really do anything about the legs, the picture came like that. I 'll just do a fade out or put him near the bottom.

**del337er** · 11-13-2009, 06:34 AM

Originally Posted by tleeart

A couple of suggestions: decrease the size of the box for a preview, it's way too large to evaluate. Aside from that, finish up the shot you have on the front of Tron, it bothers me that he's cut off at the thighs. Otherwise, finish it up, it looks great so far.

Just right click the image, and press view image. That should minimize it. Nice job on the box man, i love the front but im not feeling the back. Maybe you should do a new style tron. like in Kingdom hearts 2

**tleeart** · 11-13-2009, 10:41 AM

Originally Posted by del337er

Just right click the image, and press view image. That should minimize it. Nice job on the box man, i love the front but im not feeling the back. Maybe you should do a new style tron. like in Kingdom hearts 2

As for the preview, I knew you could do that, but it's annoying to see humongous pictures in a forum. As for idea you had, the idea of the Criterion boxes is simplicity to tell the story of the box, so I disagree with that personally.

**Trekkie313** · 11-25-2009, 05:52 PM

Here is version 2

**Trekkie313** · 11-27-2009, 04:40 AM

really wanting some feedback, everyone must be shopping

**Moogle** · 11-27-2009, 12:15 PM

Really liking how clean and crispy everyone is. Keep at it.

**Trekkie313** · 09-28-2010, 02:35 PM

Not quiet finished, need to know what the correct font is and a DVD case template before I post the final version.
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k8...g?t=1285718991

So what do you guys think?

**Eggboy'13** · 09-28-2010, 02:37 PM

Love it.

**Trekkie313** · 09-28-2010, 02:38 PM

Thanks!

Anybody else have suggestions on how to improve my box?

**Trekkie313** · 09-30-2010, 07:22 AM

Really looking for more suggestions before I upload the final...

**Spiderpig24** · 09-30-2010, 02:41 PM

I like it. It's pretty basic but it does look official, and I like the style of the front. The back looks like it could use something though, it's pretty text heavy atm.

**Trekkie313** · 09-30-2010, 02:45 PM

Considering removing some of the text about Disney, yay or nay? Does it need to be smaller font?

**Spiderpig24** · 09-30-2010, 02:50 PM

Originally Posted by Trekkie313

Considering removing some of the text about Disney, yay or nay? Does it need to be smaller font?

A smaller font might work, but you may have to take some out too.

**Watsonator117** · 09-30-2010, 03:15 PM

Originally Posted by Spiderpig24

A smaller font might work, but you may have to take some out too.

Agreed

**Sessoneon** · 10-03-2010, 07:44 PM

There's too much white text all over the back. You can easily condense that text to make a much cleaner and more simple back. Use line spacing, smaller and bold fonts sparingly. Right now it's all over and looks messy. At least make the headers gray or something to differentiate the sections. If I looked at the back and wanted to quickly find out what's on what disc or what features it has I couldn't because everything is white and not separated enough. Fit the description AROUND the flying-tron-thing instead of on top of it.

I'm not sure why you removed the awesome landscape from version 2 in this one but put it back in. All the font in the recent version can easily be fitted nicely into the empty black of version two.

Instead of the typical gray for the Criterion branding use a more fitting color to go along with the cover's overall neon blue and red style.

I wouldn't completely use the red glow on the front title. Instead try to make it match the white outline with blue glow the character below it has with some subtle neon red.

Overall, great work!

**Trekkie313** · 10-04-2010, 02:36 PM

Ok here is the update
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k8...ronrevised.jpg

**Spiderpig24** · 10-04-2010, 02:53 PM

That looks much better. The only thing I don't really like is the red Criterion label. I would change that to blue. Other than that, I like this quite a bit.

**Trekkie313** · 10-05-2010, 04:52 AM

Here is my finished box! http://www.vgboxart.com/view/39972/t...ion/?replies=2

Ignore my double post in the comments, EDIT not working.

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