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Thread: tleeart's new WIP!

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    Smile tleeart's new WIP!

    Hey everybody! Remember how I said I had one more in me before I was going on hiatus? Well, I was forced into that hiatus before I could get it out here. So I'm working on getting back in the groove with Photoshop and Illustrator, so I decided to work on that box as practice.

    Persona 3 FES is one of my favorite games ever, so I really wanted to do a box for it.

    Here's a little WIP to show you guys what I'm up to, let me know what you think.


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    Great I really like it.

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    Quote Originally Posted by RoarShark View Post
    Great I really like it.
    Thanks! Do you have any parts that require improvement so far (other than the Persona in the background, I'm either going to clean him up or change him out for a simple lineart version.)?

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    Quote Originally Posted by tleeart View Post
    Thanks! Do you have any parts that require improvement so far (other than the Persona in the background, I'm either going to clean him up or change him out for a simple lineart version.)?
    The top of the front is too busy. I think if you took out the guy and just left it just the silhouette it may look much better.

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    Quote Originally Posted by RoarShark View Post
    The top of the front is too busy. I think if you took out the guy and just left it just the silhouette it may look much better.
    Gotcha. I'm going to be changing that up. I'm still going to have the artwork, maybe utilized differently, and there will be something in the lower area as well. Thanks for the crits.

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    Update! Okay, so I threw out the old Orpheus that I painted up and did a quick vector based on part of the game's opening instead. Also, I started my work on the back. I plan on possibly adding a character on the back like how I did the main character on the front. I was thinking either Pharos or AIGIS, not sure which though. Most likely AIGIS to go with the theme portrayed on the official box. Anyway, can I bother anybody else for their thoughts?


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    This is looking great, I like this version of the front much better. I would add a character to the back.
    Quote Originally Posted by Mub View Post
    jesus its like a book telling me i can't read the other half because i bought it in a yard sale

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    Damn, that looks amazing dude. You have, for a while now been one of my favourite artists on the site.



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