Hey guys this is my entry for the Beginner Comp:
Tell me what you think about it
PS: I will start the back later
Edit: The theme for the comp was to use those glass shards
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Thread: Kingdom Hearts 358/2 Days
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10-06-2009, 07:01 PM #1
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Kingdom Hearts 358/2 Days
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10-06-2009, 07:26 PM #2
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Are you allowed to play with that glass any more? Right now they look so photorealistic they really clash with the rest of the cartoony box. If you're allowed to edit them to look more cartoonish try that so they match everything else a little better.
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10-07-2009, 12:26 AM #3
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What you would suggest doing with them ive tried some stuff to try and make it look cartoony but its not working
Originally Posted by Delicious1
Version 2:
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10-07-2009, 05:57 PM #4
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Update!
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Not much added but changed the font and gave everyone a shadow
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10-07-2009, 06:05 PM #5
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no, keep the back like V1 and use black text in the white space
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10-07-2009, 06:42 PM #6
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Update!
Version 4:
Added a different background for the back and gave it an orange overlay, added the "Wireless DS Multi - Card Play" on the back and made the screenshots lower
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10-07-2009, 08:48 PM #7
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I dont understand your use of glass. I mean sure, theres shards of glass, but where did they come from? I see now broken/cracked mirror, window, or any other type of glass anywhere. What im saying is that the random glass makes no sense and doesnt flow with anything
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10-07-2009, 11:22 PM #8
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I agree with Brett, the glass looks out of place. Everything else looks pretty boring and uninspired.
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10-08-2009, 04:25 PM #9
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Originally Posted by Brettska99
Ive now decided that this is not going to be my entry for the comp Originally Posted by Sven
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10-08-2009, 04:28 PM #10
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Change the hue of the shards to match the background better.
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